Open F2F Class notes 19th September (Eddie)

feasibility study = a study carried out before a project is begun to establish if the project can be completed

Original:

These days I was so busy with my work that I only had equal 5 hours for sleeping. The project I was working on is an animation trailer which is a story of NeZha, and he is a very important character from the most well known Chinese legend called “Journey To The West “. The story of NeZha is a little bit sad, because his father tried to kill him twice. The first time is just on the day he was born,his father considered him as a monster because he was carried three years, and he was wrapped by a shiny red ball. The other time is he try to defend the bully who is the son of the dragon king, but eventually kill him.

Edit:

These days I am extremely / unbelievably / ridiculously busy with my work that I am only averaging about 5 hours of sleep a night. The project I am working on is an animation trailer based on the story of Ne Zha, a young boy from [background] and a very important character from the best-known Chinese legend called “Journey To The West “. The story of NeZha is somewhat sad, because his father tried to kill him twice. The first time was on the very day Ne Zha was born;  his father considered him as a monster because his mother had  carried him for three years, and he was encased in a shiny red ball. The second time Ne Zha’s father tried to take his son’s life was when the young boy tried to defeat a bully in the person of the Dragon King’s son, whom he eventually killed.