Open F2F Class Notes 18th July (Harmony)

I haven’t have a cat I don’t have a cat

 

Adopt/adopted/adopting:  taking in and making part of your family.

Did they dirty when you find themwere they dirty when you found them?

Profile Picture:  your main picture on social media, lets people know who you are.

Paws:  feet of pets (cats and dogs)

Shed:  to lose fur/hair.

They doesn’t like waterthey don’t like water/ they didn’t like water.

 

Original:

 

I think cats are definitely the cutest creature in the world. I love cats so much, because cats are smart, dexterity and they always been sensitive in a very dramatic way.lol… I was adopted a short hair cat with grey color and beautiful green eyes, he also have four adorable paws, which is my favorite part of my cat. we called him mimi, it because he always make sounds like that when he was a baby. And one thing is very funny about he, every

 

Edited:

 

I think cats are definitely the cutest creatures in the world. I love cats so much, because cats are smart, have dexterity and they always are sensitive in a very dramatic way.lol… I adopted a short hair cat that was a grey color with beautiful green eyes, he also had four adorable paws, which was my favorite part of my cat. we called him mimi, it because he always made sounds like that when he was a baby. And one thing is very funny about him, every evening when you go to bed to sleep and turn off the lights, mimi would jump on your body and he would get very close to your face.  Probably to check if I had died.

 

I adopted a grey short haired cat with beautiful green eyes.

That was a grey color with…

With grey colored fur/hair and beautiful green eyes.

 

Competences:  skills or capabilities.

Current:  now/happening now.

Meanwhile, current students already build up different kinds of competences now, and in some situations they do much better than us

Re-write:  Students nowadays are already building up different kinds of skills, and sometimes they do much better than us.

 

Let — someone is letting you do it.  (you had to ask.) allowed.

Eg.  My boss let me go home early.

Eg.  My boss made me work overtime.  (you have to/forced)

Eg.  My boss asked me to do overtime, but I refused.