Open F2F Class Notes 17th November (Tony)

I’m bored on the weekends.

The weekends are boring.

factory – a place to produce goods

Original –

Lily likes cakes and often buys a kind of shapes and flavored cakes. As this reason, she wanted to learn how to make them by herself. At the beginning, she bought a cooking book and some baking tools, and started to cook following the book. In the first few times, she always failed but she could not gave up. Lily asked for some advices from the people who have some successful experiences. Being persistent, now she can cook tasty cakes and biscuits.

Correction –

Lily likes cakes and often buys all kinds of shapes and flavors. So, she wanted to learn how to make them by herself. At the beginning, she bought some baking tools, and started to follow a cook book. The first few times, she always failed but she would not give up. Lily asked for some advice from the people who had some successful experiences. Being persistent paid off, now she can cook tasty cakes and biscuits.

She would keep cooking, but she couldn’t because her oven was broken.