Open F2F Class Notes 17th January (Tony) [3]

correction

After graduating from university, I am used to life without winter break. Thanks to air conditioning, we can discuss projects and make a planning at work very warmly. But it hurts skin seriously and we are supposed to put on more skincare products to protect our skin. My work in the advertising sector often compels me to work overtime, which leads to lots of leftovers in the fridge. I generally go and buy groceries in the weekends. In my point of view, dishes cooked by myself are really scrumptious

Upgraded Vocabulary – 

accustomed to – be used to

comfortably – warmly

damaged – hurts – not in perfect condition

perspective – point of view

home-cooked meals – dishes cooked at home

After graduating from university, I am accustomed to life without winter break. Thanks to air conditioning, we can discuss projects and make a plan at work very comfortably. But it damaged my skin seriously and we are supposed to put on more skincare products to protect our skin. My work in the advertising sector often compels me to work overtime, which leads to lots of leftovers in the fridge. I generally go and buy groceries in the weekends. From my perspective home-cooked meals are really scrumptious.

Original –

Bosses often compel staff work overtime according to their own require.It seems that employees don’t have the right controlling their own life.Meanwhile,People aren’t aware of the differences of work and life,especially in China. People seldom say no to unreasonable workload.From my respective,respect should be put between both two.

Correction –

Bosses often make staff work overtime according to their own requirements. It seems that employees don’t have the right to control their own lives. Meanwhile, people aren’t aware of the differences between work and life, especially in China. People seldom say no to unreasonable workloads. From my perspective, we should respect each other.