Open F2F Class Notes 13th October (Eddie)

I was with another Chinese boy. are you a boy? no. I was with another Chinese person. or I was with a Chinese boy.

Capital =/= Capitol

desert (Gobi, Sahara etc) ‘de – sert

dessert (cake, fruit etc) des – ‘sert

oasis = a place in the desert which has water and vegetation

Original:

The last day of September I arrived in Iran, I went to three cities of this country. Teheran, Isfahan and Shiraz. Through this journey I had a preliminary understanding of this country. Their country’s people are very nice and I noticed their country really like water, you can find water channels beside the road. All the cities have channels, many kinds of channels, the water was clean and you can find birds drunk in there. This design are very good. In Isfahan I met an old retired engineer, he told me the story about the channels. He said when Isfahan was built , the city engineer designed channels through all the city, when the river had water, the channels also had water. I really like this kind of design, in China I just see this kind of thing in the country side, my home town also have water channels. Before I went to Iran, I never thought this design can popular in the city. It gave me a lot of design inspiration.

Edit:

On the last day of September I arrived in Iran. I went to three cities in this country: Teheran, Isfahan and Shiraz. This journey helped me get a better understanding of this amazing country. The people of Iran are very nice and I noticed they really like water; you can find water channels along the roads. All the cities have many kinds of channels, the water is clean and you can find birds drinking from them. This design is very good. In Isfahan I met an old retired engineer who told me the story behind the channels. He said when Isfahan was built, the city engineer designed channels throughout the city, to give its inhabitants a constant source of water for their needs. I really like this kind of design; in China I just see this kind of thing in the country side. My home town also has water channels. Before I went to Iran, I never thought this design can be popular in the city. I can use it as inspiration for my future designs.