Online Class Notes (Li)

Vocabulary

around/all over town

Grammar

Using speech marks – pay attention to the punctuation

ex. He said, “You’re very smart.”

ex. “Go away!” is written on the wall.

ex. “Why did you not stay at home?” my mother asked.

ex. “Eat your vegetables,” my mother said, “or you’ll get in trouble!”

Through Charlotte worked all night, and a beautiful web appeared on the next morning. The first glance to notice that web is Lurvy who wasn’t interest in beauty when he took breakfast to Wilbur and then he shocked. He ran back to Mr Zuckerman’s home and told him this news,and Mr Zuckerman didn’t believe it . At the result Mr Zuckerman came to yard with Lurvy next he noticed a web hang on the door ,and there were two word which was Some Pig on it . When Mr Zuckerman went back home and told his wife this things,after that he said :we had an no ordinary pig . Soon，this miracle thing spread widely all town so that more and more people want to go to that yard to see this miracle thing. The truth was Wilbur became famous so that his life had saved

Revised:

Charlotte worked throughout the night, and a beautiful web appeared on the next morning. The first person to notice/discover the web is Lurvy who wasn’t interested in all things beautiful when he brought breakfast to Wilbur and then he was shocked. He ran back to Mr Zuckerman’s home and told him this news,and Mr Zuckerman didn’t believe it . As a result, Mr Zuckerman went to the yard with Lurvy and he noticed a web hanging on the door. There were two words, “Some Pig” written on it. When Mr Zuckerman went back home and told his wife these things, he said, “We have an extraordinary pig.” Soon, this miracle thing spread around/all over town so  more and more people wanted to go to that yard to see it. The truth was Wilbur became famous and his life had been saved.