Online Class Notes (Li)

Vocabulary

come up with/think of an idea

Grammar

Wilbur asked/questioned – use these verbs if the following speech ends with a ?

It’s about a spider in a quiet evening. Spider think about how to save Wilbur from dying. And finally, she found an idea in her mind. The next of the day, Fern plays with her friends in her uncle’s home. Fern’s friend who is Avery took a frog to Fern’s uncle’s house. Meanwhile, Fern’s uncle was making a pie. He was angry. He talked with Fern, “Could you play outside?” There is a swing in the Fern’s uncle’s garden. And then, Fern and her friend were playing a swing together. They spent a happy time there. Fern took a friend to yard. Fern’s friend Avery saw a spider there and he want to catch spider. As a result, a bad goose egg saved spider’s life because of that egg creates a horrible smell. Finally, Fern and her friend has to leave the yard. And then, Fern’s uncle give the food to Wilbur. And then, Wilbur consider the great bad egg saved the spider’s life, so he leave a cup of noodles onto the rat. When evening is coming, Fern’s uncle leaves the yard. The animals all around went to sleep. The spider start to working, spin a web.

Revised: 

It’s about a spider in a quiet evening. Charlotte thinks about how to save/stop Wilbur from dying. And finally, she came up with/thought of an idea in her mind. The next of the day, Fern plays with her friends in her uncle’s home. Fern’s friend, who is Avery took a frog to Fern’s uncle’s house. Meanwhile, Fern’s uncle was making a pie. He was angry, so he asked Fern, “Can you play outside?” There is a swing in the Fern’s uncle’s garden, so Fern and her friend were playing on the swing together. They spent a good time there. Fern took a friend to the yard. Fern’s friend Avery saw a spider there and he wanted to catch the spider. As a result, a bad goose egg saved spider’s life because of that egg creates a horrible smell. Finally, Fern and her friend have to leave the yard. And then, Fern’s uncle gives the food to Wilbur. And then, Wilbur believes the great bad egg saved the spider’s life, so he leaves a cup of noodles for the rat. When evening arrives, Fern’s uncle leaves the yard. All the animals went to sleep, and the spider starts to spin a web.