Online Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

JesseMelody

Writing exercise

Dear Asjun and Laurie,

As per our conversation about Ctrip 20th anniversary Hotel Brand of the day campaign yesterday.
We want to take this opportunity to promote our china hotels together with the group to attend this event.
Therefore, we will follow the offer at 25% off BAR rate (same as other hotels with extra 5% bar discount) and offer the free late C/O at 14:00pm and free upgrade to next category ,all subject to hotel availability.

The booking/exposure date will be at the first week of October.
Stay date : until end of this year.

Based on the group and Crip request, please offer one free voucher for the this marketing exposure event.

Thank you

Melody

Dear Asjun and Laurie,

As per our conversation about Ctrip 20th anniversary – Hotel Brand of the day campaign yesterday, we want to take this opportunity to promote our china hotels as a group. We believe that this strategy is a particularly good opportunity for our group to ensure that our China hotels can stand out among Ctrip’s Chinese customers.

Therefore, we have decided to offer the following:

  • 25% off BAR rate
  • Free late C/O at 14:00pm (subject to availability)
  • Free upgrade to next category (subject to availability)
  • 20% off single spa treatment (excluding promotions and retail products)
  • F&B 20% off dining and non-alcoholic beverage

The booking/exposure date will be on a single day (TBD), during the first week of October.

Stay date: until end of this year.

Based on the group and Ctrip request, please offer one free voucher for this marketing exposure event.

Thank you

Melody

Vocabulary

participate / involve

attend – go to

Grammar

we offering / we will offering – we offer / we are offering / we will offer 

after I sending out for this email – after I send out this email 

every hotel they got their code – every hotel got their code

we will define with the daily rate – we will define the daily rate

we not offer for other people – we don’t offer to other people

they booking online – they book online / they are booking online