Online Class Notes (Jesse) [91]

Writing exercise

We hired a new staff 7 weeks ago and her position is nurse and her name is Vicky and she works 5 days . Vicky’s salary is most higher than other staffs but she has enough confident can make $20000 as her personal target per week . I like people who has knowledgeable and professional in there’s industry.

I got many costume’s feedback that Vicky has polite attitude and very helpful because she will tell a lot of tips about skincare because she worked with Dermatology before and she can finish her reached every week.


We hired a new staff 7 weeks ago whose position is a / who works as a nurse and her name is Vicky and she works for 5 days (each week) / she works 5 days a week. Vicky’s salary is the highest out of all of my staff but she has enough confidence to make $20,000 as her personal target per week. I like people who has knowledge and professionalism / who is knowledgeable and professional in their industry.

I got many customers’ feedback that Vicky has polite attitude and is very helpful because she will tell customers a lot of tips about skincare because she worked in Dermatology before and she can reach her target every week.

Pronunciation

I won’t read it
i want to read it

Grammar

whose = ta de
who’s = who is / has

I have a teacher whose (his) hair is long.
I have a teacher who’s (he is) named Jesse

I am bigger than you
I am older than the others
I am the biggest out of everyone
I am the oldest compared to everyone

speak / spoke / spoken
break / broke / broken
eat / ate / eaten
steal / stole / stolen

He breaks into many places
He broke into our place
He has broken into many places

Our place was broken into by a thief and he stole my money and iphones so he will be killed by Dion because she will shoot him with a gun. Dion will buy a safe to keep everything safe. She thinks safety is important, and she wants to be safe.

there are 2 mothers who talk to me

she is very new to in Australia

he brought some food back to home

Vocabulary

aggressive – strong personality

I can’t show it

if he performance stays like that

time after time / again and again / over and over 

he turned 6

is he mature for his age? = compared to his classmates, is he mature?

sensible – dong shi