Online Class Notes (Jesse) [30]

Writing exercise

Liz Dawson did not smile as the Jello imposter stole her identity. Dee Dee walked past table 18 and said that the Jello Liz Dawson who was all green looked cool with the green hair but he didn’t realise that it was actually made out of jello, then he handed the her a envelope which says he is hosting a cosplay party in the cafetorium. MN gave real Liz Dawson another stricke because she was shouting in the cafetorium and she was very annoyed due to the fact that the Jello her was making her getting in trouble. The the jello imposter snuck into her spot inther line and everyone thought that she was the real Liz Dawson who shouted her name out loud.

which / who / where / when / following that / next / suddenly

Liz Dawson did not smile as the Jello imposter stole her identity. Dee Dee walked past table 18 which was seated with students and said that the Jello Liz Dawson who was all green looked cool with the green hair but he didn’t realise that it was actually made out of jello. After that, he handed the her a envelope which says he is hosting a cosplay party in the cafetorium. MN gave real Liz Dawson another strike because she was shouting in the cafetorium and she was very annoyed due to the fact that the Jello her was making her getting in trouble. The jello imposter snuck into her spot in the line and everyone thought that she was the real Liz Dawson who shouted her name out loud.

Grammar

I have green hair – just you have hair
I have the green hair – some specific green hair that the person knows who you’re talking about

Vocabulary

aftershocks – when the earth shakes after an earthquake