Online Class Notes (Jesse) [30]
Writing exercise
Here is an email I sent to my colleagues yesterday,
“I’m looking to comments from global AB peers on the XX design of X project, and I’m interested in gathering comments in a way that would make sense to you. My focus is seeking best practices or current XX structures pain points (if there’re any) from your engineering/operation experiences so that we could refer to or avoid for X project, and I reckon the below ways may be efficient for me to present and have people to comment on.
– 15 mins in weekly XX core call (next Wed?)
– Teams channel
Does the above make sense to you? If you suggest a way for the conversations to happen, I’ll present you with the proposed XX design we’ve worked out and additional XX specific background information.”
Here is an email I sent to my colleagues yesterday,
“I’m looking to get some comments / I’m looking for some comments from global AB peers on the XX design of X project, and I’m interested in gathering comments in a way that would make sense to you. My focus is seeking best practices or the pain points (if there are any) of the current XX structures from your engineering/operation experiences so that we could refer to or avoid for the X project, and I reckon the below ways may be efficient for me to present and have people to comment on.
– 15 mins in weekly XX core call (next Wed?)
– Teams channel
Does the above make sense to you? If you suggest a way for the conversations to happen, I’ll present you with the proposed XX design we’ve worked out and additional XX specific background information.”
Pronunciation
then – “th ehhh n”
colleagues – “leegz”
pain – “paeeeeen
refer – “ruh FER”
above – “uh buv”
present / proposed
design – “duh zaeeeen“
ground / house / around / how – “aaaooooooo”
around – a r o u n d
First say: cora calla – then remove the “a”: core call
there’re many people in china
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