Online Class Notes (Jesse) [30]

Writing exercise

Here is an email I sent to my colleagues yesterday,

“I’m looking to comments from global AB peers on the XX design of X project, and I’m interested in gathering comments in a way that would make sense to you. My focus is seeking best practices or current XX structures pain points (if there’re any) from your engineering/operation experiences so that we could refer to or avoid for X project, and I reckon the below ways may be efficient for me to present and have people to comment on.

– 15 mins in weekly XX core call (next Wed?)
– Teams channel

Does the above make sense to you? If you suggest a way for the conversations to happen, I’ll present you with the proposed XX design we’ve worked out and additional XX specific background information.”


Here is an email I sent to my colleagues yesterday,

“I’m looking to get some comments / I’m looking for some comments from global AB peers on the XX design of X project, and I’m interested in gathering comments in a way that would make sense to you. My focus is seeking best practices or the pain points (if there are any) of the current XX structures from your engineering/operation experiences so that we could refer to or avoid for the X project, and I reckon the below ways may be efficient for me to present and have people to comment on.

– 15 mins in weekly XX core call (next Wed?)
– Teams channel

Does the above make sense to you? If you suggest a way for the conversations to happen, I’ll present you with the proposed XX design we’ve worked out and additional XX specific background information.”

Pronunciation

then – “th ehhh n”

colleagues – “leegz”

pain – “paeeeeen

refer – “ruh FER”

above – “uh buv”

present / proposed

design – duh zaeeeen

ground / house / around / how – “aaaooooooo”

around – a r o u n d

First say: cora calla – then remove the “a”: core call


there’re many people in china