Online Class Notes (Jesse) [30]

MB walks out of his home and BAM a rack with boxing glove on the handle end of it bonks MB right in the nose! (Do not step on a patch of leaves if it is suspected to be a trap But on the other hand if you don’t want to trigger any traps, be on the look out of anything that can trigger a trap). A boy wearing a devil horn and costume jumps out of a nearby bush, laugh at MB and scampers away.

MB walks out of his home and “BAM” a rake with a boxing glove on the handle end of it bonks MB right in the nose! (Do not step on a patch of leaves if it is suspected to be a trap But on the other hand if you don’t want to trigger any traps, be on the look out for anything that can trigger a trap). A boy wearing some devil horns and costume jumps out of a nearby bush, laughs at MB and scampers away.

Grammar

My mum works every day for money.
I should look out for the monster

no more “and” all the time
use: with sth doing / with sb doing, +ing verb
no “then”s 

He places the candy leading from his porch to that boy with devil horn’s porch. Following that, MB rings the doorbell with he jumping over the bush and probably tripping. The boy with devil horn’s opens his door and following that he looks out but didn’t see anyone. Following that he saw the candy on his porch so became delighted and began following the trail right up to MB’s porch. Then he saw the bar of chocolate on MB’s porch with him picking it up and starting to eat them. Then at that very moment MB peaked out of his door and saw the boy with horns eating the CB that he had placed there so he got the NSS pumpkin head and smashed it over his head.

He places the candy leading from his porch to the porch of that boy with devil horns. Following that, MB rings the doorbell with him jumping over the bush and probably tripping. The boy with devil horn’s opens his door and following that he looks out but doesn’t see anyone. Following that he sees the candy on his porch so becomes delighted and begins following the trail right up to MB’s porch. Then he sees the bar of chocolate on MB’s porch with him picking it up and starting to eat them. Then at that very moment MB peaks out of his door and sees the boy with horns eating the CB that he has placed there so he gets the NSS pumpkin head and smashes it over his head.