Online Class Notes (Jesse) [30]

get your tenses right, and remember plural / singular

MB is disappointed but suddenly he finds that scrapper is on the window. It screams because of MB. He laughs and has an idea. MB puts teddy on the kitchen table and he puts some apples in a sauce which is red. If he wants to make a halloween party, he needs a pumpkin head. He works at a orange big pumpkin for hours and at last, he finishes. He smiles when he puts it on the window. MB waits at the table and waits some more to buy sauce apple. At last he hears a doorbell and goes toward it.

MB is disappointed but suddenly he finds that scrapper is on the window. It meows / shrieks because of MB. He laughs and has an idea so he puts teddy on the kitchen table and he puts some apples in a sauce which is red. If he wants to make a halloween party, he needs a pumpkin head / jack-o-lantern. He works on a big orange pumpkin for hours and at last, he finishes. He smiles when he puts it on the window sil / ledge. MB waits at the table and waits for someone to buy the toffee apples. At last he hears a doorbell and goes toward it.

Vocabulary

toffee apple 

they burst into tears – suddenly start crying

he tries to comfort them

tray – the thing we put in the oven to cook

Grammar

opinion > fact > type > noun