Online Class Notes (Jesse) [30]

Grammar

on June – in June 

OK we’ve made it to the 2nd paragraph. I said the 2nd paragraph have 3 aspects. One = design: example if MB and ICM each made an ice cream, ICM’s will sell better because of the design. Two = posters. Posters are an important thing when it comes to selling things. Posters are the thing you need when you start. They can help you to let more people know abouty our shop. In conclusion ICM is better than MB in many ways. I think the most important thing about IC selling is flavor.

OK we’ve made it to the 2nd paragraph. I said the 2nd paragraph has 3 aspects, with the first one being design. For example if MB and the ICM each made an ice cream, the ICM’s will sell better because of the design. The second one is marketing material including posters, videos, and other advertising. Posters are an important thing when it comes to selling things. Posters are the thing you need when you start because no one knows about your ice cream business yet so you need a way to advertise it. They can help you to let more people know about your shop, and they are very cheap to make and to print so anyone can do it. In conclusion the ICM is better than MB in many ways as the ICM has a good ice cream design, some good flavors that are pretty normal, and he knows how to operate the machine, fix it, refill it, and the best locations to sell ice cream. plus has a good reputation, but MB has none of those. However, I think the most important thing about IC selling is flavor.