Online Class Notes (Jesse) [1 hour] [57]

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immediate correction activity 

Writing exercise

The line chart demonstrated the average amount of CO2 emissions of inhabitants during the period between 1967 and 2007. The total amount of four countries experienced a downward trend throughout this period.

The CO2 emissions in the UK was the dominated one during 40 years. Start from almost 11 tonnes in 1967, there was a gradually/slowly/consistently drop in terms of it, reaching 10 tonnes in 1987. The following 40 years witnessed a consistent decline, with 9 tonnes in 2007 eventually.

The CO2 emissions in Sweden remained waving trend. From roughly 9 tonnes in 1967, Sweden raised sharply, reaching the peaking at 10.5 tonnes in 1977. Subsequently, a fall can be found in terms of it, with approximately 7 tonnes in 1987, ending with just above 5.5 tonnes in 2007.

There was an enormous similar trend between Italy and Portugal. (The trends of Italy and Portugal were similar/ had a lot in common.) The increase of the former was particularly remarkable over 40 years, during which time it almost doubled, from about 4.2 tonnes to round 7.8 tonnes. Compared with Italy, Portugal had a four-hold surge/leapt/soared/rocketed during this period.


The line chart demonstrated the average amount of CO2 (carbon dioxide) emissions of inhabitants during the period between 1967 and 2007. The total amount from four countries experienced a downward trend throughout this period / time / amount of time / throughout these 40 years / 4 decades.

The CO2 emissions in the UK was the dominant one during 40 years. Starting from almost 11 tonnes in 1967, there was a gradual/slow/consistent (adj) drop (n), reaching 10 tonnes in 1987. The following 40 years witnessed a consistent decline, with 9 tonnes in 2007 eventually / finally / in the end.

The CO2 emissions in Sweden remained a waving trend. From roughly 9 tonnes in 1967, Sweden raised sharply, peaking at 10.5 tonnes in 1977 / reaching a peak of 10.5 tonnes in 1977. Subsequently, a fall can be found in terms of it, with approximately 7 tonnes in 1987, ending with just above 5.5 tonnes in 2007.

There was a very / really / there was a quite similar trend between Italy and Portugal. (The trends of Italy and Portugal were similar/ had a lot in common.) The increase of the former was particularly remarkable over 40 years, during which time it almost doubled, from about 4.2 tonnes to around 7.8 tonnes. Compared with Italy, Portugal surged/leapt/soared/skyrocketed four-fold in terms of their CO2 output during this period.

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all boys can do every future game

EGBDF – every good boy deserves fruit

FACE

resemble alike looks like similar to -RALLST

i listen to music

I will move to Australia eventually < > I will move to Australia soon / shortly

You’re great! In terms of your marketing, you can sell really well, and in terms of / regarding your communication, everyone understands you! You’re so great at your job!

Your english is great in terms of it

I’m considering about X
I’m thinking about X

You’re incredibly beautiful!!
You’re incredibly OK looking