Online Class Notes (Jesse)

words to replace “and”
I went to the park and I saw a dog. = When I went to the park, I saw a dog
I went to the park and at the park, I saw a dog = I went to the park where I saw a dog
I went to the park and it was fun = I went to the park which was fun
I saw a man and he had a hat = I saw a man who had a hat
I saw a man in the park and he was walking his dog = I saw a man in the park walking his dog.
I went to school and I walked there with my friend = I went to school with me walking with my friend
I went to school and I went there with my friend = Walking with my friend, I went to school

background + action as much as you can

Formal writing:
There are so many different phones we can choose including iphone, samsung… huahui and I have used many of them but I think that the best one out of all of them is the iPhone. The reason I think that is …..

Story writing:
In the quiet library, full of books, there is only 1 person except for MB, a lady who is reading a book on a desk next to MB.

Grammar

my mum tell me – my mum told me

we all think we will fail 

she pushes her chair and someone shooshes her = she pushes her chair with someone shooshing her

Vocabulary

original – yuan lai

compares – bi jiao
eg. he compares his drawing with the book

faint / pass out – go to sleep quickly because you’re scared, sick

he drives over the border of scotland

he sees the scottish flag

coincidence – when 2 things happen that seem unrelated so it’s a suprise

In the quiet library, full of books, there is only 1 person except for MB, a lady who is reading a book on a desk next to MB. MB draws teddy’s family tree and when he is drawing he makes some squeek squeek sounds which is a little bit noisy. He draws teddy’s one and after that when he draws himself, he can’t remember any family and then the lady who is next to him puts the chair really near to him and tells him that he looks like the people in the picture. While she is pushing her chair, another person shooshes her so she says “ok ok!”.