Online Class Notes (Jesse) [80]

Today we focused on:

background – what you see, what the characters feel, thinking, time, what happened before
action – what happens / what he does

Writing exercise

Mr Bean is angry with the stranger and the hat which is the same as the strangers because he is lying on MB’s sofa which is in the center of the living with a big bowl of fruit which is full of fruits and he becomes busy eating. The stranger watches TV til morning to evening and he eats a lot of food such as fruit, meat and so on. MB changes the film to another which is his favorite but the stranger is so selfish that he only want to watch his favorite. So MB feels annoyed and he has another idea that he wants to eat the last food in the plate but the stranger is faster than him so MB only has a bone which has no meat on it and MB hates the stranger.

light from the tv / night time / sound from the tv and from the fat man eating / room

One night, in the living room at MB’s house, with a bright light coming from the TV while the stranger and Mr Bean are watching TV on the sofa. MB is feeling angry with the stranger, and the hat that is the same as the strangers because he is lying on MB’s sofa busy eating a big bowl of fruit which is full of fruits. The stranger watches TV from morning to evening and he eats a lot of food such as fruit, meat and so on. MB changes the film to another which is his favorite but the stranger is so selfish that he only want to watch his favorite. So MB feels annoyed and he has another idea that he wants to eat the last food on the plate but the stranger is faster than him so MB only has a bone which has no meat on it and MB hates the stranger. / which makes MB hate him.


Background…. MB and the man…. MB ….. hat …..the man….. bowl of fruit….. the man

Background…. MB and the man…. MB…. the man… hat … the man… the bowl of fruit

Try to keep the structure (jie gou) of the sentence clear and don’t repeat things and separate them.

stranger…. stranger…. food …. MB …. film….. stranger …..

Vocabulary

0.7 – zero point 7

Speaking exercise

In MB’s bedroom, he wears pyjamas and there is a towel on MB’s hand, and the sound of the stranger brushing his teeth and singing is coming from the bathroom which makes MB uncomfortable and annoyed. The man starts gargling with the water in his throat which makes both MB and Giselle uncomfortable and want to hit the man. Finally, the man comes out and sings the dumb song again and MB is unhappy and said it unhappily before sighing and walking into the bathroom.