Online Class Notes (Jesse)

Writing exercise

ohhh MB cries and the director who looks old catches that moment on the film. That was great he said crazily. The dinosaur is running slowly after MB who suddenly slips with a stick and says owww! He takes the stick which makes MB slip and runs to a round place and he wants to hit the dinosaur with that stick but he is so short and the dinosaur is so tall so he can’t hurt the dinosaur at all. Noooo the director says.. Yes the dinosaur controller says who has a pair of glasses and wearing a black, long coat and the dinosaur throws his stick with its sharp teeth so MB cries again and the dinosaur turns off again because the director says cut cut! That was great the director says crazily again because the dinosaur eat MB. Yes good the dinosaur controller says. Then he turns off the dinosaur. Hello? Hello? Hello?? MB falls down from it’s bottom and his nose goes up because he hits the ground which is hard and muddy. When he sees the director talking to him he stands up and talks to the director.

1 – action – things they do
2 – background – describing things, look like, feel, story, should do / want to do

Speaking exercise

sunny / beautiful / warm / quack / tweet / pond / alone

Kiki’s first speaking:
One sunny day, MB goes to the park again and it was very beautiful and warm. The ducks which is in the pond goes quack and the birds which are in the trees goes tweet and under the park it’s alone but there are 2 people on the bench. They’re boyfriend and girlfriend and MB is coming. Then he sees them and suddenly he says “ohhh quack” because he sees some ducks and he does not want to disturb / bother the private conversation so he doesn’t look at them after that. “hello” the man says friendily. Could you please take some photo for us? Then MB make a big decision. He will help them to take photos because maybe they will give him some money. “yes ok” he says but when he sees the photo, he says “that’s a phone” because phones can’t take photos before. Then he sees the phone takes a photo of MB’s face goes ugly and he says “ohhh” because he knows how to take a photo with a phone.

One sunny day, MB goes to the park again which is very beautiful, warm, and quiet / empty. The ducks which are in the pond go quack and the birds which are in the trees go tweet and he sees 2 people on a green bench. In the park there are almost no people but there are 2 people on the bench who are boyfriend and girlfriend and just then, MB comes so he sees them. Suddenly he says “ohhh quack” because he sees the man gives the lady a ring and there are some ducks and he does not want to disturb / bother the private conversation so he doesn’t look at them after that. “hello” the man says friendily. Could you please take some photo for us? Then MB makes a big decision. He will help them to take photos because maybe they will pay him. “yes ok” he says but when he sees the photo, he says “that’s a phone” because phones couldn’t take photos before. Then he sees the phone takes a photo of MB’s face which looks ugly. Then he says “ohhh” because he knows how to take a photo with a phone.


Lots of background (Jesse):
One sunny day in a beautiful, warm park, right next to a pond there are 2 people sitting on a bench talking. After a quiet morning at home, MB was bored so he decided to go for a walk in the park. Mr Bean wanders into the park and sees the 2 people