Online Class Notes (Jesse)

Writing exercise

MB was watching a horror movie about some vampire and he sighed and bit a popcorn so hard that one of his teeth fell out.
he then went to the bathroom to check why his mouth hurted so much and he saw that one of his teeth was very wobbley so he tried to pull it out but it hurted very much so he gave up. after that he mixed some salt water and drank it but it was too salty but he drank it any ways and he started singing for some reason
but it was to salty so he spat all the water back out. After that he strapped a string to his wobbley tooth and started pulling but it wouldn’t budge so he strapped the string to the door and kicked it but the door’s handle fell of instead of his teeth so he was very angry and thought about going to the dentist. then he tried to shove a bookcase out of the window but it was too heavy so he started pumping a jumpy castle and he thought it was ok so he took it out of the house but he nearly tripped over MW’s cat so he shooed it away. then he placed the jumpy castle under the window and he strapped his teeth to the bookcase but when it went down on the jumpy castle, he and the sofa went down with it.

which / who / with sth doing / ing verbs to continue / because (due to the fact that / as / since)

MB was watching a horror movie about some vampire and he sighed while he bit a piece of popcorn so hard that one of his teeth fell out.
He, then went to the bathroom to check why his mouth hurt so much / to check on his tooth and he saw that one of his teeth was very wobbley / loose so he tried to pull it out but it hurt very much so he gave up. After that he mixed some salt water and drank it but it was too salty however, he drank it anyway and he started singing for some reason while he was gargling but it was too salty so he spat all the water back out into the sink. After that he strapped a string to his wobbley tooth and started pulling but it wouldn’t budge and even though he strapped the string to the door which he kicked, but the door’s handle fell of instead of his tooth so he was very angry / really bothered / quite annoyed / a little frustrated and thought about going to the dentist. Afterwards, he tried to shove a bookcase out of the window however it was too heavy so he started pumping a jumping castle which he thought was OK, so he took it out of the house but he nearly tripped over MW’s cat which was sleeping on the doorstep, so he shooed it away. Then he placed the jumping castle which was fully pumped under the window before strapping his teeth to the bookcase and his body to a sofa, while throwing a frying pan at the bookcase so that it could fall down to the jumping castle. But when it went down on the jumping castle, he and the sofa went down with it.

Vocabulary

G’day mate, how’s it goin?

cat phrase catch phrase 

thou hurteth

thou ist my student = you are my student

gargling – washing mouth
gurgling – dying sound

sink

afterwards < > beforehand

Grammar

i crash my friend – i crash into my friend