Online Class Notes (Jesse) [21.5]
Writing exercise
My family and our friends went to a resort on the Drogan Boat Festival. The resort is like an all inclusive place which is on the edge of Shanghai. We chose the hotel in Shanghai because if we go out of Shanghai, we need to be quarantined for 14 days.
My friends and I had Dragan Boat Festival in a resort which is on the edge of Shanghai because we need to be quarantined for 14 days if we travel out of it.
There were 8 apartments in the resort and every apartment has / had one or two rooms. We lived in the apartment in which two rooms were connected.
The resort had 8 apartments, some of which had one bedroom and some of which had two bedrooms. We lived in an apartment having two bedrooms, two toilets and one living room. The two bedrooms were connected with a door by which my friends and I could communicated directly.
Most of the time, we were playing cards and chess at the hotel because many of the shops were still closed. The food was yummy and we could order take out food like milk tea, Mcdonald’s,etc.
Chattingã€playing cards and chess are the most things that we did as many shops of the resort were still closed. The resort had its own kitchen offering customers meals but ordering take-out food was another good choice as well.
My family and our friends went to a resort on the Drogan Boat Festival. The resort is like an all inclusive place which is on the edge of Shanghai. We chose the hotel in Shanghai because if we go out of Shanghai, we need to be quarantined for 14 days.
My friends and I had Dragan Boat Festival in a resort which is on the edge of Shanghai because we need to be quarantined for 14 days if we travel out of it / if we leave the city.
There were 8 apartments in the resort and every apartment has / had one or two rooms. We lived in the apartment in which two rooms were connected.
The resort had 8 apartments, some of which had one bedroom and some of which had two bedrooms / some of which had 1 bedroom, with others having 2. We stayed in an apartment having / which included / which came with two bedrooms, two toilets and one living room. The two bedrooms were connected by a door through which my friends and I could communicate directly.
Most of the time, we were playing cards and chess at the hotel because many of the shops were still closed. The food was yummy and we could order take out food like milk tea, Mcdonald’s,etc.
Chattingã€playing cards, and chess were the main things that we did / were the things that we did most of the time as many shops of the resort were still closed. The resort had its own kitchen offering / which offered customers meals but ordering take-out food was another good choice as well.
Vocabulary
the offerings of SE includes 1on1 classes and group classes
I had tea and sugar. = together in 1 cup
I had tea, and sugar. = separates them
charger = brick + cableÂ
stay < > leave
wisdom teeth / toothÂ
you pulled out all 4 wisdom teeth
why i thought i did a good job – the reason that I thought I did a good job was that
overtime work – jia ban
i have some people who depend on me
I wanted to – I was just looking to do / I was just interested in doingÂ
Grammar
I didn’t feel painful – it wasn’t painful / it didn’t hurt / I feel pain in my tooth / I have some pain in my tooth / it is really soreÂ
through / by = using or the method
eg. I contact you by phone / through email
my difficult for the current situation – my difficulties for the current situation are..
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