VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [39]
Writing exercise
I like reading. I read a book about a detective and a criminal story recently. This is a very interesting book and I like it so much so I want to share it to Jesse 🏻♀️
This storyās background is in Los Angeles. There was a bad guy call Mr.Blane and he also a very rich man. There was a beautiful girl was in trouble who was Mr.Blaneās daughter.
Frank was a tough man and he working for Mr.Blane . He goes to the office which is Lenās office . Len is a detective . He doesnāt like Mr. Blane and he doesnāt want to work for Mr. Blane . But he wants to save Carmen which is Mr. Blaneās daughter.
Carmen and a young man lied to her father that she had been kidnapped. They asked her Dad to pay $100000 to save herself. They got the money from Frank and Len and they goes to San Francisco. Carmen gave the money to the school which was for poor children and Carmen works in the school because she likes to stay there . Len found Carmen in San Francisco . Carmen hate her Dad and she gave Len some papers show her dad is a criminal. Lenās took the papers to the police stationā¦
I like reading. I read a book about a detective and a criminal story recently. This is a very interesting book and I like it so much so I want / wanted to share it with Jesse 🏻♀️
This storyās background is in Los Angeles / It is set in LA. There is a bad guy call Mr.Blane and he is also a very rich man. There is a beautiful girl was in trouble who is Mr.Blaneās daughter.
Frank is a tough man and he is working for Mr.Blane. He went to the office which is Lenās office . Len is a detective who doesnāt like Mr. Blane and he doesnāt want to work for Mr. Blane, but he wants to save Carmen who is Mr. Blaneās daughter.
Carmen and a young man lied to her father that she had been kidnapped. They asked her Dad to pay $100,000 to save herself. They got the money from Frank and Len and they went to San Francisco. Carmen gave the money to the school which was for poor children and Carmen works in the school because she likes to stay there . Len found Carmen in San Francisco . Carmen hates her Dad and she gave Len some papersĀ to show her dad is a criminal. Len took the papers to the police stationā¦
Vocabulary
arrest – the police get you
eg. the police arrested him
ransom – money you pay to make someone go free
fiction = not fact
non-fiction = fact
responsibility – zen ren
ability – neng li
availability – time you have free
When will you pay?
Please let me know when is the most convenient time for you to pay.Ā
Please just let me know when you are ready to pay and I will arrange everything for you.Ā
excuse – jie kou
Could I (please) get a regular latte?
therapy – treatment to make you healthy (skin, brain, body…)
Grammar
I can’t say it like this
I had seen
eg. At 1pm today I already seen 2 customers.
Before our dinner I had already drunk 2 beers
Before our dinner I had had 2 beers
goes / is / walks / eats = sometimes / always
he / she / it / name – doesĀ
I / you / we / they – doĀ
I can’t to say again – I can’t say it again
I went out to have a class with you
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