Online Class Notes (Jesse) [9.5]

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Today I talk about my best friend mother. She is retired now but before she is a business woman. She has a lot of business for the education and she is smart. She has phd and 2 master degrees and when I chat with her I can learn a lot of things from her because she have many experience and she is funny, she is smart, and I happy to talk with her, and she is take care of me. She is very rich but she don’t mind to share anything for the people like I go to gold coast, I live in her house and she bring me to go many place, and go to the road trip, the boat is her own and she is a christian and she always introduce the jesus the good things to me and I respect her because she have the good lifestyle, she is healthy, and she very nice.

Grammar

she bring me go to tourist hotspot – she brought me to tourist hotspots

today he come – today he came 

I have sick – I am sick
eg. I am really sick

I print out – I printed it out

I come back I just read some papers – when I come back home, I just read some papers

I just have little bit symptoms and a little bit tired – I just had a few symptoms and I was a little bit tired 

Vocabulary

antibiotics

antiviral medicine

hoarse
eg. my voice is hoarse

vietnamese – vee yet nam meez

gamble – du qian

Today I woke up at 7 and I felt not well because I have been sick for 3 weeks so I took the medicine to make myself feel better. And I went to work by train and I was on the train for 25 minutes and I listened to the IELTS test on YT for 20 minutes.

I have been to Japan
I have class for 1 hour

An old person
Describe an older person who you respect
Who it is – best friend’s mother 
How you knew him / her – 5 years ago she came for treatment, came to aus and she took care of me 
What kind of person he/she is – business woman, retired, nice, takes care of everyone, learn a lot from her 
Why you respect them – PHD, masters, christian

Today I talk about my best friend mother. She is retired now but before she is a business woman. She has a lot of business for the education and she is smart. She has phd and 2 master degrees and when I chat with her I can learn a lot of things from her because she have many experience and she is funny, she is smart, and I happy to talk with her, and she is take care of me. She is very rich but she don’t mind to share anything for the people like I go to gold coast, I live in her house and she bring me to go many place, and go to the road trip, the boat is her own and she is a christian and she always introduce the jesus the good things to me and I respect her because she have the good lifestyle, she is healthy, and she very nice.