Online Class Notes (Jesse)

Finish the writing correcting from today.

Let Stacy try to correct more of her writing herself

In comparison to last time, the local government adopted a more efficient policy on COVID test prof. Every residence would get a sticker as long as the person finished the test, with these simple profs people just need to show their stickers when they were asked.
Why the government changed its policy is because there were too many people to visit(?) the Yi ma tong system at the same time caused it to broke down/crash.So in order to reduce the pressure of the system and make this step more efficient, they figured out this clever and creative measure.(clever,smart,wise)
When it comes to the sticker, which has four different cartoon figures,I should say it was super popular among all ages of residences.The stickers looked so cute and convenient to use, so we were supportive of this human-centered policy.One of my besties massaged me about the sticker excitedly in the first morning of the test which made me really looked forward to get it.We only know we’ll get a cute panda sticker that day,but later someone on the internet said the government staff members designed four mascots, so we were looking forward about the rest of them.I searched it then saw a series of designed drafts which were a bit different from the ones that I finally got.
It was a good incentive for people to take the test as soon as possible,and it worked.You could see almost every one showed off their panda sticker on the WeChat moment in the first day.Kids can’t wait to let their parents took a photo for them with the sticker that on their water bottle or the back of their hand,and adults would put the sticker on the back of their phone.
The four mascots are panda, golden snub-nosed monkey,takin and crested ibis which are the four treasures of Qingling mountain,also,belongs to the first-class state protected animals.I think the stickers are not only made a success in COVID test but also spread the endangered animals to mention residences the importance of them,and on the other hand,the mascots which are dressed on different dynasties of traditional costumes showed the charm of our culture.

In comparison to last time, the local government adopted a more efficient policy on proof of COVID tests. Every residence would get a sticker as long as the person finished the test, with this simple proof people just needing to be shown when they were asked.

The reason the government changed its policy is because / that there were too many people accessing / using the Yi ma tong system at the same time, causing it to break down/crash. So in order to reduce the pressure of the system and make this step more efficient, they figured out this clever and creative measure.(clever,smart,wise)

When it comes to the sticker, which has four different cartoon figures,I should say it was super popular among all ages of residents. The stickers looked so cute and were convenient to use, so we were supportive of this human-centered policy. One of my besties / best friends messaged me about the sticker excitedly on the first morning of the test / in the morning of the first day of the test which made me really looked forward to getting it. We only knew we would get a cute panda sticker that day,but later someone on the internet / someone online said the government staff members had designed four mascots, so we were looking forward to the rest of them. I researched it then saw a series of designed drafts which were a bit different from the ones that I finally got.

It was a good incentive for people to take the test as soon as possible,and it worked.You could see almost every one showed off their panda sticker on the WeChat moment in the first day.Kids can’t wait to let their parents took a photo for them with the sticker that on their water bottle or the back of their hand,and adults would put the sticker on the back of their phone.

The four mascots are panda, golden snub-nosed monkey,takin and crested ibis which are the four treasures of Qingling mountain,also,belongs to the first-class state protected animals.I think the stickers are not only made a success in COVID test but also spread the endangered animals to mention residences the importance of them,and on the other hand,the mascots which are dressed on different dynasties of traditional costumes showed the charm of our culture.

Vocabulary

mini program – a small wechat app

clever = smart + fast thinking + knowledgeable
smart = intelligent / IQ
wise = smart + experienced + good decisions etc

residence(s) = place you live
resident(s) = person who lives somewhere

Grammar

most of time – most of the time 

what is time?
what is the time?

if you have been vaccinated

if you have vaccinated