Online Class Notes (Jesse)

ask yourself:
nouns: which one? how many? (do I need to put “s”? do I need the / a?
verbs: what time? (which tense should I use here for this verb?)

Plastic Surgery, maybe one of the most profitable industry in the world ?

When the world goes into a more advanced phaze and can meet most people’s basic needs, people will focus on three experiences: love, longevity and beauty, which is a theory from my friend. Most of his investment evolves according to these three themes.

I did not aware this topics before until i feel my aging after year of 35. I tried botox after recommended by one of my colleague. In fashion industry, people pay more attention to small details that can increase the appearance , which I felt shallow before and not interested in them. However, human being are biologically afraid of losing. it is more painful that we have them first and lose them later than we never have them. if we never tasted the good feeling of possessing them, we won’t miss them, which is the most painful part for generals. Plastic Surgery industry exists and makes profit fundenmentally base on this theory. it’s not necessory yet most people are hard to resist it.

To some extent, i think the technologies are wonderful. I tried one, called photo rejuvination, last week. The surgeon checked my face and said, you need remove some yellowness on your face to look brighter. Then she used one kind of machine to do some operations on my face. Later, she murmured to herself, next is to remove the pimple scar. The whole process last about 10 mins. when a nurse handed over me the mirror, i felt my whole skin already look brighter after the magical 10 mins. I might have used 5 years to get the yellowness and scars yet it just removed most of them within 10 mins. The surgeon asked me to take more water in the following days, which would help my body to metabolize the melanin quicker. After one week, Pantone color on my face moved to 1 or 2 levels at least.

Technology makes life better as long as we don’t misuse them or addict to them. Life is all about losing. In the end, we will lose everything. Live present and enjoy today, which might be the most crucial thing that we can posses throughout our life.

Plastic Surgery, maybe one of the most profitable industries in the world?

When the world goes into / enters a more advanced phase and can meet most people’s basic needs, people will focus on three areas : love, longevity and beauty, which is a theory from my friend. Most of his investments are generally based around / often favor these three themes.

I was not aware these topics before until i felt my aging after 35 / I turned 35. I tried botox after recommended by one of my colleagues. In the fashion industry / In fashion, people pay more attention to small details that can enhance the appearance / enhance someone’s appearance, which I felt was shallow before and I wasn’t interested in them. However, human beings are biologically / innately afraid of losing. It is more painful that we have something first and lose it later than if we never have it in the first place / originally. If we never tasted the good feeling of possessing something / it, we won’t miss it / there would be nothing to miss, which is the most painful part for most people / part generally / for the majority of people. The plastic surgery industry exists and makes profit fundementally based on this theory. It’s not necessary, yet / however most people are hard to resist it / most people can’t resist / find it difficult to resist. 

To some extent, i think the technologies are wonderful. I tried one, called photo rejuvination, last week. The surgeon checked my face and said, you need remove some yellowness on your face to / in order to look brighter. Then she used a kind of machine to carry out some procedures on my face. Later, she murmured to herself, next is to remove the pimple scar / blemishes. The whole process lasted about 10 mins. When a nurse / the nurse handed over a mirror to me, i felt my whole skin already looked brighter after the magical 10 mins. I might have used 5 years to get the yellowness and scars, yet it just removed most of them within 10 mins. The surgeon asked me to have / drink more water in the following days, which would help my body to metabolize the melanin quicker. After one week, the Pantone color on my face moved to 1 or 2 levels at least / the skin color on my face moved at least 1-2 levels on the Pantone color scale. 

Technology makes life better as long as we don’t misuse them or get addicted to it. Life is all about losing (and) in the end, we will lose everything. Live in the present and enjoy today, because the experiences we have might be the most crucial things that we can posses throughout our lives.

Vocabulary

take some dirty waters – drink some dirty water 

distinct – differences / uniqueness
extinct – end of a species

blemish – spots / holes / marks

Grammar

hand over my things with to my coworkers –

he might don’t think about rest – he might not think about rest

high expectation about yourself – have high expectations of yourself / put high expectations on yourself

the whole human being need to have diversities – all human beings need / the whole human race needs

hierarchical (adj)
hierarchy (n)