Online Class Notes (Jesse)

Writing exercise

I had a hamster when I was in university and I think this hamster is the smartest one that I’ve never seen.His name is Tuan Tuan which is small and has white fur and a gray line on its back.Its breed is winter white dwarf hamster.
There weren’t many choices for pet keeping when I lived in dormitory with hamsters being a perfect option.My hamster has a good and regular habit and he always keeps his environment clean and tidy,therefor,all I need to do is to brush and wash the whole cage and put in enough new wood shavings once a week ,plus,add food and water into his bowls in time.
I remember that there were two special stuffs I bought for him.One is a fitness equipment haha,actually it’s a rolling ball which you can put a hamster into it and it enables the hamster to roll on the floor and to see the outside world.Tuan Tuan often went for a free drive around our dormitory and corridor,with which he had a lot of fun,but later I threw it away,because the ball has some holes on the surface and which might hurts his leg when he runs quickly.Another one is a summer sleeping mat which is made of metal,and the usage of it is to help the hamster cool down(?) in summer.It works for hamsters,further more, I can make a double effect with the mate by putting the cage in a plastic basin and then fill the basin with a few cold water,then I will get a “flat and about to meld hamster”,because it’s too comfortable to press its whole body on the cool mat.

I had a hamster when I was in university and I think this hamster was the smartest one that I’ve ever seen. His name was Tuan Tuan and he was small and had white fur and a gray line on his back. His breed was winter white dwarf hamster.
There weren’t many choices for pet keeping / having a pet / choices for pets when I lived in a dormitory, with hamsters being a perfect option. My hamster had a good and regular habit and he always kept his environment clean and tidy, therefore, all I needed to do was (to) brush and wash the whole cage and put in enough new wood shavings once a week, plus, add food and water to his bowls on time / in a timely way / regularly.
I remember that there were two special things / some special stuff (that) I bought for him. One was a piece of / one was some fitness equipment haha / lol, actually it was a rolling ball which you can put a hamster into it and it enables the hamster to roll on the floor and to see the outside world. Tuan Tuan often went for a free drive / roll around our dormitory and corridor,with which / during which he had a lot of fun, but later I threw it away, because the ball had some holes on the surface and which might hurt his legs when he runs quickly. Another one was a summer sleeping mat which was made of metal, and the usage of it is to help the hamster cool down in summer. It works for hamsters, furthermore, I could make a double effect with the mat by putting the cage in a plastic basin and then fill the basin with a little cold water,then I would get a “flat and about to melt hamster”,because it was so comfortable after pressing its whole body on the cool mat / because pressing its whole body on the cool mat made it incredibly comfortable and relaxed. 

which – and it
nouns – which one? how many?
verbs – what time?

Grammar

she recommended me this restaurant – she recommended this restaurant to me

in time – not too late before sth happens
eg. the fireman didn’t arrive in time, so the house burned down.
on time – just not late
eg. I was late to work and my boss said “you need to be on time”

I come to SE to learn English – reason
I come to SE and learn English – you do 2 things, learning is the result

Vocabulary

skewer / kebab

move it back and forth 

he would twitch his nose

holds onto the bars and stares at the food

commute
eg. I don’t want to waste time on the commute / I don’t want to waste time commuting

Pronunciation

bite – baaiiiiiit