Online Class Notes (Jesse)

I want to improve my communication skills and analysis skills in my job . Besides, i also want to learn some skills such as learn language and play music, and i want to contact some interesting and different things

I want to improve my communication skills and analyticial skills in my job. Besides this / that, i also want to learn some skills such as learning languages and playing music, and i want to experience / do / participate in some interesting and different things

Grammar

i have any grammars on it? – do I have any grammar problems in this sentence?

There is a dog playing in the park.
There is a dog and he is playing in the park.
There is a dog who is playing in the park.

There are many staff in my office working very hard on this project
There are many staff in my office and they are working very hard on this project.
There are many staff in my office who are working very hard on this project.

point at

he goes / she goes / it goes / the family goes / Jesse goes…

Pronunciation

analyticial – annal LIT tickll

Vocabulary

anyway….  / besides
eg. You should do your grammar homework because it’s really useful and effective. Besides, it’s easy!

A girl has a friend. She always play with him and she also go to his home. Her friend’s family like to shoot animals and the girl doesn’t like they shoot animals. She has a magical finger and if she doesn’t like some things, she just point these things which she doesn’t like and that things will be changed. One day the girl saws her friend’s family go to forest to shoot birds and she points them with her magical finger and this time her father shoot 4 birds. There is 4 birds, follow them on their way home.

A girl has a friend and she always plays with him and she also goes to his home / plus she often goes to his home. Her friend’s family likes to shoot animals and the girl doesn’t like that they shoot animals. She has a magical finger and if she doesn’t like some things, she just points at the things which she doesn’t like and those things / and they will be changed. One day the girl watches / sees her friend’s family go to forest to shoot birds and she points at them with her magical finger and this time her father shoots 2 ducks. There are 4 ducks, following them on their way home.