Online Class Notes (Jesse)

Homework

Review the writing we corrected today + correct the rest of the writing yourself and try to add “which” once or twice. + watch my which & where video tonight.

Vocabulary

develop – make
eg. Apple makes the iphone / Apple develops the iphone
eg2. your body develops cancer

cause – sth happens
eg. smoking causes cancer = cancer happens when you smoke

over and over / again and again

Grammar

in which 
eg. I have a pen in which there is ink.
eg2. I have a bag in which I keep my things.

which = and it
eg. I have a pen which is black = I have a pen and it is black.

Pronunciation

sore = hurt = “sor”
sour = like a lemon = “saaaooo wer”

Writing exercise

That is/these are? what female cats would go through when they are in heat.More importantly,their rutting season(?) normally last from the January to the late autumn and in which there are a lot of circles and each of them will continue for around 6 days ,so female cats will suffering over and over.Moreover,if we don’t control the situation,it would cause/develop some bigger problems,like tumors or cancers(pyometra,ovarian cancer and uterine cancer ).Therefor,spaying/taking our cat to spay can practically prevent these potential harms.

But if she’s still uneasy, she will roll around on the floor or move around our house.

That is / that stuff is / those things are what female cats would go through when they are in heat. More importantly,their rutting / mating season normally lasts from the January to the late autumn and in which there are a lot of cycle and each of them will continue for around 6 days ,so female cats will suffer over and over. Moreover, if we don’t control the situation, it would cause/develop some bigger problems like tumors or cancers/ If you don’t control the situation tumors or cancers (pyometra, ovarian cancer and uterine cancer) will develop / situation you may develop tumors or cancer. Therefore, spaying/taking our cat to be spayed can practically prevent these potential harms / problems.


I’ve been having a cold for some time. I guess it’s probably because I breathed in some cold air while i was practicing English dialogues on the rooftop of our apartment.I went to there for a few times in the morning which were cold and windy.That’s why I got a cold and a sore throat.I’m still not well after I took some amoxicillin and some Chinese medicine capsules.
So then my mom recommend me a natural home remedy for it which called steamed orange remedy,and (you )guess what? It worked immediately like a magical. All you need to do to make it is to cut the both sides of an orange, which the top one is a little thicker than the bottom one,in order to steam it entirely and so that it can stand.Then put it in a plate or bowl in case the juice flows away.Don’t forget eat all the pulp and drink the juice before it turns/gets cold.
It said that oranges have some kind of oil inside which can sooth/moisten your throat well.As it said ,I can feel that my throat becomes more comfortable that is not so itchy and sore,moreover ,the sneezing and runny nose have improved.I should say it really helped,so I keep eating an steamed orange every day .

I’ve been having a cold for some time. I guess it’s probably because I breathed in some cold air while i was practicing English dialogues on the rooftop of our apartment. I went to there for a few times in the morning which was cold and windy / and the mornings were cold and windy. That’s why I got a cold and a sore throat. I’m still not well after taking some amoxicillin and some Chinese medicine capsules / I’m still not well even though I took some medicine.
So then my mom recommended me a natural home remedy for it which is called steamed orange remedy,and (you )guess what? It worked immediately like magic. In order to steam it entirely and so that it can stand, all you need to do to make it is to cut the both (of the) sides of an orange, but just remember the top one is a little thicker than the bottom one.

Then put it in a plate or bowl in case the juice flows away. Don’t forget eat all the pulp and drink the juice before it turns/gets cold.
It said that oranges have some kind of oil inside which can sooth/moisten your throat well.As it said ,I can feel that my throat becomes more comfortable that is not so itchy and sore,moreover ,the sneezing and runny nose have improved.I should say it really helped,so I keep eating an steamed orange every day .