Online Class Notes (Jesse)

Writing exercise

I often feel sleepy in the last few days even though I think I got enough sleep for around 8 hours each night. I don’t know why and I guess maybe this is exactly what people are in winter haha.
My friend and I went to the new park which we had been there once before . We were not able to visit the whole park last time because it’s pretty large.There was a wide river ,and which some goods,ducks and a large group of koi fish lived in.People enjoying feeding them and we really wanted to do the same thing when we saw those lovely animals interacted with people, but we didn’t bring any food.For this time, we bought a little package of steamed buns in advance and gave all of them to those cute little animals.
We found something interesting that goods are stronger ,bossier (bossy) and smarter than ducks, and they will drive the ducks away when people throw food ,so ducks can’t get near the food when goods are there, so usually the ducks had to eat/can only get a little leftovers, poor ducks…
Besides this,we walked around the park along a better route than last time and of course we explored the rest part of the park. We came across a wide bridge and walked on to it , then we found the view of there was broad and the landscape was flat and it was quiet because there were few people around.

I felt sleepy quite a lot in the last few days / I have been feeling quite sleepy in the last few days even though I think I got enough sleep for around 8 hours each night. I don’t know why and I guess maybe this is exactly how people are in winter haha / this is exactly what people feel in winter.
My friend and I went to the new park which we had been to once before. We were not able to visit the whole park last time because it’s pretty large. There was a wide river ,and where some geese, ducks and a large group of koi fish lived in / There was a wide river, which some geese, ducks and a large group of koi fish lived in. People enjoy feeding them and we really wanted to do the same thing when we saw those lovely animals interacting / we saw them interact with people, but we didn’t bring any food. For this time / This time, we bought a little package of steamed buns in advance and gave all of them to those cute little animals.
We found something interesting that geese are stronger ,bossier (bossy) and smarter than ducks, and they will drive the ducks away when people throw food ,so ducks can’t get near the food when geese are there. So, usually the ducks had to eat/can only get a little leftovers / a small amount of leftovers / a small amount of what is left over, poor ducks…
Besides this,we walked around the park along a better route / we walked around the park and took a better route than last time and of course we explored the rest part of the park. We came across a wide bridge and walked on to it / walked over it / walked half way across it / walked to the middle, where we found that the landscape was broad was flat / where there was a view of a broad and flat landscape and it was quiet because there were few people around / there weren’t many people around.

Vocabulary

zero tolerance policy 

it is almost half-half 

why – the reason that
what – the thing that
how – the way that
where – the place that
eg. I know why you are tired = I know the reason that you’re tired
eg2. I know what this is = I know the thing that this is
eg3. I know how you feel = I know the way that you feel
eg4. I know where you are = I know the place that you are

rhythm 

view
eg. I want a room with a view = a good view
eg2. From the bridge there was a great view of the surrounding landscape.

instrument – yue qi

Grammar

I went to a park. I have been to it many times.  = I went to a park which I have been to many times.

I went to a park. At that park, there were many kids. = I went to a park where there were many kids.

when you’re in a level – at a level
when you’re at this zone – in a zone

if you break through those problems

Pronunciation

last time – lasstime