Online Class Notes (Jesse)

Writing exercise

When Charlie go back home , he finds a dollar bills which is laying on the street. he picks up it and then waits a moment , and nobody turns back to pick it ,so he decides to go to local shop to buy a luscious bar of chocolate, and the rest of money he will give her mother. When he gets to the shop, there is a shopkeeper who is a fat man is sitting by a counter .Charlie says,” I want to buy Wonka’s chocolate” and then the shopkeeper walks along to a chocolate shelf and turns back to the counter, then he said,” here you are” . When Charlie receives the chocolate, he starts to wolf it. The shopkeeper says,” if you wolf chocolates , you will gut-ache.” . When Charlie finishes to eat it, he find a coin which is laying on the counter ,so he buy a bar of chocolate again. But this time , he finds a Golden ticket in it ,and he feels very surprise includes the shopkeeper. The other customers also discover Charlie who is the last one to find Golden ticket,and they want buy it by money. The shopkeeper is a kind man and he asks Charlie protects it , because it is very precious. Finally, he offs the shop and runs back to his home , then he rushes in his home and yells at his family members excitedly ,”i get a golden ticket”

When Charlie goes back home , he finds a dollar bills which is laying on the street. He picks it up it and then waits a moment , and nobody turns back to pick it up, so he decides to go to a local shop to buy a luscious bar of chocolate, and the rest of the money he will give (to) his mother. When he gets to the shop, there is a shopkeeper who is a fat man (that is) sitting by the counter. Charlie says,” I want to buy Wonka’s chocolate” and then the shopkeeper walks along to the chocolate shelf and turns back to the counter. Then he said,” here you are” . When Charlie receives the chocolate, he starts to wolf it down. The shopkeeper says,” if you wolf chocolates down, you will have / get a gut-ache.”. When Charlie finishes eating it, he finds a coin which is laying on the counter ,so he buys a bar of chocolate again. But this time , he finds a Golden ticket in it ,and he feels very surprised and so does / is the shopkeeper. The other customers also noticed that Charlie was the last one to find the golden ticket,and they want buy it with money. The shopkeeper is a kind man and he asks Charlie protects it , because it is very precious. Finally, he offs the shop and runs back to his home , then he rushes in his home and yells at his family members excitedly ,”i get a golden ticket”

Vocabulary

nibble
eg. the mouse nibbled away on the cheese

sweet foods / junk food / candy / snacks 

she’s losing weight / I’m on a diet

Grammar

I stop (a) to do (b) sth
I stop doing (a) sth