Online Class Notes (Jesse)

It is Sofia’s responsibility to correct her own mistakes when speaking, and speak as accurately as possible. She is not allowed to use Chinese logic and translate from Chinese to English. This should be her focus for all speaking in class: speak using correct grammar & use English logic as much as possible.

Mr Bean is in the park. A man is teaching Mr Bean how to play the smart phone. Mr Bean thinks he likes the phone and he wants to get one. He tells Mr Bean how to go to the store, but suddenly there is a thrund and is rainny. Mr Bean runs to the smart phone store.

Mr Bean is in the park and a man is teaching Mr Bean how to play with the smart phone. Mr Bean thinks he likes the phone and he wants to get one. The man tells Mr Bean how to go to the store, but suddenly there is a thunder and it’s rainy / raining so Mr Bean runs to the smart phone store.

when we after school we will have a lot of homework again because in school we are at 4 o’clock to go home but in school we late the time, and when we late the time our teacher will teach us again and we can’t to write homework, always to do what our teacher says to do.

After school / When we leave school / When we finish school we will have a lot more homework. At school we go home when it’s 4 o’clock but we are late to leave school, and when we are late to leave the school our teacher will teach us again but we can’t to do our homework, we must just do what our teacher says to do.

Mr Bean is playing with the smart phones and there is one very very small phone and I think it is very cute, and there’s a magnifying glass on the very small phone so Mr Bean can see what things on the phone. The man says to the shop assistant, then he says “you like this” and he says the shop assistant to go with Mr Bean and to find the smart phone. When Mr Bean sees the phone’s price, and the phone is very expensive. Mr Bean can’t to pay for the smart phone. He is thinking to make own smart phone and he draw the things and when he pull one pieces of paper and it will be like a clock is ringing or make a trumpet sound, and I think it is very useful and fun.

Mr Bean is playing with the smart phones and there is one very very / super / incredibly small phone and I think it is very cute. There’s a magnifying glass above / over the very small phone so Mr Bean can see the things on the phone. The man says to the shop assistant “he doesn’t like the small phone”, then he says to Mr Bean “you‘ll like this” and he asks the shop assistant to go with Mr Bean and to look for the smart phone. When Mr Bean sees the phone’s price, but the phone is very expensive. Mr Bean can’t to pay for / can’t afford the smart phone. He is thinking to make his own smart phone and he draws the things (that) he wants and when he pulls one piece of paper and the clock will ring or make a trumpet sound, and I think it is very useful and fun.

Perfect speaking from Sofia – no mistakes to correct!!

Mr Bean makes his own phone and when he sees the man and his girlfriend he says ok i will take a photo for you, so he takes a photo for the man and his girlfriend. The man says ohh you have a smart phone! do you have music? and Mr Bean says “of course” … beep and there was some music.

Vocabulary

magnifying glass 

shop assistant 

Grammar

late (adj / adv)
eg. I am late to school (adj)
eg2. I arrived late to school (adv)

what is your name?
I know what your name is

who are you?
I know who you are

What should we do?
The teacher tells us what we should do
The teacher tells us what to do.