Online Class Notes (Jesse)

remaining / rest

First version

He always stay there ,when he waked up the next day , he found all the palace became chocolate pool . Due to well known of Wonk’s chocolate ,the other shopper have jealous feeling for it, so they appointed spied to steal secret recipe, and afterwards they succeed . Wonka had to stop the work of factory and dismissed all the workers . He locked the gate tightly till now

Corrected by Nell

He stayed there all the time ,when he waked up the next day , he found all the palace became a chocolate pool . Due to well known of Wonka’s chocolate ,the other shopper have jealous feeling for it, so they appointed spied to steal Wonka’s secret recipe, and afterwards they succeed . Wonka had to stop the work of factory and dismissed all the workers . He locked the gate tightly till now

Corrected together

He stayed there all the time, so / and when he woke up the next day , he found all the palace had become a chocolate pool. Due to the fame of Wonka’s chocolate / As Wonka’s chocolate was well known, the other shoppers were jealous of him so they appointed a spy to steal Wonka’s secret recipe, and afterwards they succeeded. Wonka had to stop the work of his / the factory and dismissed all the workers . He locked the gate tightly till now.

There is a boy found a golden ticket after a few days. Eating is his favourite things, so he had flabby muscle. He liked to eat many things. His mother thought he wasn’t eat many things if he needed norishment such as vitamin and she thought Wonka’s factory would give his son this stuff. Charlie’s GPs thought this boy is repulsive and Charlie’s birthday, which was the next day, was coming. His family members gave money to Charlie to buy Wonka’s chocolate and when Charlie bought his chocolate, he decided to open wrapper paper and his mother said “there is only the rest 3 people to get to this golden ticket, so if you couldn’t get it you shouldn’t be disappointed”.

There is a boy who found a golden ticket after a few days. Eating is his favourite thing to do, so he was fat / was flabby / chubby and he liked to eat many things. His mother thought he doesn’t need to eat other things to get nutrition such as vitamins because she thought Wonka’s factory would give her son this stuff. Charlie’s GPs thought this boy was repulsive and Charlie’s birthday, which was the next day, was coming. His family members gave money to him to buy Wonka’s chocolate and when Charlie bought it, he decided to open the wrapper paper and his mother said “there is only 3 people remaining to get to this golden ticket, so if you couldn’t get it you shouldn’t be disappointed”.

Grammar

Use “AND” to continue your sentences naturally

I need the remaining food from yesterday to make the cake.
I have the remaining food = I have the food I didn’t eat

I am well known (adj) = I am famous
I am a teacher (n) = I am a thing called “a teacher”

spy (v)
spy (n)
spies (n)
spied (v)
eg. I’m a spy (n) so I spy (v) on you. Spying (vn) is so bad! There are many spies (n) in the world.