Online Class Notes (Jesse)

Writing exercise

Charlotte knew that another big pig had a good chance to win the first prize, but she would not give up, and Wilbur trusted (believe in ) her.
Wilbur asked her about when she would start to make the new web, he looked her tired and swollen, he remark, if you make a web and catch some flies, you might feel better. And that day she started to make it later, first she had a nap.
Next day at morning, many people coming and admiring to Wilbur, and then they moved to the next pig’s pen and said more favorable notes (remarks) about that big pig’s size. The day was too hot, and at noon, the families gathered (met) at truck, sweating and hungered. They needed to wait for next day when the judges would say something about the prizes.

Charlotte knew that another big pig had a good chance to win the first prize, but she would not give up, and Wilbur trusted and believed in her.
Wilbur asked her about when she would start to make the new web, but he thought she looked tired and swollen, so he remarked, “if you make a web and catch some flies, you might feel better”. And later that day she started to make it, but first she had a nap.
The next day in the morning, many people were / started coming and admiring / people came to admire to Wilbur, and then they moved to the next pig’s pen and said more favorable / positive comments / remarks about that big pig’s size. That day, it was too hot, and at noon, the families gathered (met / got together) at the truck, sweating (v) / sweaty (adj) and hungry (adj). They needed to wait for the next day when the judges would say something about the prizes.

Grammar

I am sweating (v)
I sweat when it is hot (v)
I will sweat tomorrow because it will be hot (v)

I bore you (v)
I bored you yesterday (v)
I have bored you before (v)
I am boring you (v)
I am bored / I am boring (adj)

it is hot today = today is hot
it is 5 PM now = now is 5PM

I read it for them – help them to read
I read it to them – I speak and they listen
eg. my cousin cannot read so I will read it for her = to help her read
eg2. my cousin is a baby so I will read to her = she can listen to you read

I have class and then I go to sleep.
After I have class, I go to sleep 

I don’t understand nothing – I don’t understand anything 

Vocabulary

life is a miracle / life is precious 

knitting / sowing
eg. people learn to knit but how do spiders learn to make webs? spiders are born with that ability

I trust you – I think you will do or say the correct thing, you will not lie, you will not trick me.
I believe in you – I have confidence in you / I think you’re real

it makes them interested in him – it makes them like him

ham / bacon / pork / pig meat 

listless – no energy

ratherinstead
eg. I would rather have class with Elena than go to work
eg2. I would like to have class with Elena instead of going to work

wearily / weary – tired – “weer ril lee”
eg. I walked wearily home = I walked in a tired way home
eg2. I was weary after work

maybe (casual) = perhaps (formal)

tent – a little cover / room you can sleep in when you’re camping
eg. I took a tent to camp with