Online Class Notes (Jesse)

grammarly.com 

making sentences: so what? and?? who, what, where, why, how, when, for how long, with who…? what’s your actual point? 

Think like a child – speak english in long sentences and use simple words that a kid would use. Always remember: WHAT’S YOUR POINT?? Why should we care? Explain it.

https://www.english-exam.org/IELTS/general_writing_samples_task_1/ – emails, letters, communication

https://www.english-exam.org/IELTS/academic_writing_samples_task_1/ – graphs, charts, tables, data 

https://www.english-exam.org/IELTS/ielts_writing_samples_task_2/ – essays, long writing topics

Grammar

how to say? – how do you say?

in TV – on TV

come back to China

she wanted us to do it

introduce ourselves to each other 

Vocabulary

study fee – tuition fee

the more the better 

in my logic – as far as I am concerned / in my point of view

prepositions – jie ci

I had a coffee but when I stopped drinking, I was sad

what jobs will disappear and what jobs will be created?

A:

I am Cindy (Yao Xing – Chinese name). I was born and grew up in Shanghai, China.
I worked in an equipment company before I study here. It was this job that made me choose this University for future life.
I like swimming and it makes me feel free. And I l like travelling, due to the Corona-virus, i haven’t traveled for a long time so I look forward to meeting all of you in the UK!
See you next Monday!

B:

Making coal has disappeared.I think this is positive because the coal will be releasing while we used coal to cook food or anything. That’s situation is polluting the environment, so i think it’s positive.
Making coal is a good skill because we live in countryside and if we are not able to use electricity. Maybe coal can instead of electricity. So, I think sometimes it’s negative.

C:

I worked in watch company when i was intern. It was an honor to see watch marker to repair complex movement. They need to spend 2-3 weeks focus on repair it. That’s a good job.

D:

Yes! Sometimes, it represents people’s standard of living is getting better and better. But i have another perspective that i really like buying shoes and i really love my shoes. Sometimes, my shoes is broken and i don’t want waste, i only want to find a repair guys to repair them. And i want to share a photo of shoemaker and that’s a good reminiscence.

E:  I sent this email to my teacher and I want to listen to your opinion, too.

I am not satisfied with the essay I have written. Because I don’t understand HARVARD REFERENCING and I want to read more model essay that maybe can help me solve my problems.

I want you help me where I can find more model essay if you agree with me about my essay problems.

essay:

With the development of society, the progress of science and technology leads to more and more advanced artificial intelligence. Our jobs in the future will be changing. What’s the peroblems we will face in regard to work in the future and how can we to solve them?

I think that man and machines are differnet, machines can improve our quality of life, we need to focus on which jobs cannot be replaced by robots. Does Industry 4.0 have to lead to a work-related struggle between man and machines? don’t robots also offer us certain opportunities? Eamonn Fitzgerald, Business Spotlight. 3/2016, Based on an abridged version of the article.

klaus Schwab, executive chairman of the World Economic Forum, wrote：“The current technological revolution need not become a race between humans and machines…” Eamonn Fitzgerald, Business Spotlight. 3/2016, Based on an abridged version of the article. Is there really no competition?

I am happy to live in the present society. We can learn more new technology and we challenge ourselves every day.

Robots is a job killer for people but meanwhile robots will bring more new technology and info. For example: “Yumi is the world’s first truly collaborative robot, abb sys of its latest tireless worker. Eamonn Fitzgerald, Business Spotlight 3/2016. People cantnot keep working more than 24 hours, but robots can do and robots can do more and more and they are also very efficient. Once, my father cooked and he picked a call up and then he forgot that he was cooking. In the end the dinner was failed. After a few months, my father bougt a robot that always reminder him of everything. Somethimes, rotbos are good to people and we need to study how to use it. I think “trainer” is a good job and training new users on how to use the robot. More and more robots will be used which means after-sale maintenance is a good job.

Robots are tacking over our jobs; it is a real thing. Human is progressing but we cannot compete with robots and we must attach importance to these probles. Millions of jobs will go as robots rise. Eamonn Fitzgerald, Business Spotlight. 3/2016. For example, too many people with limited cooking ability and old people and disabled cannot cooking by themselves, rotbots is a good assistant. The biggest benefit is the time saved and the food is health than fast food.

In coslusion, I don’t think people worried abot robot is job killer however the robot is a good helper. Robot and people working together to creat endless possibilities. We need to have good people and good robots to change our enviorment. People live longer and longer only when technology is more advanced.

A:

I am Cindy (Yao Xing – Chinese name). I was born and grew up in Shanghai, China.
I worked in an equipment company before I studied here. It was this job that made me choose this University to study at in the future.
I’m into swimming because it makes me feel free and alive. And I love travelling, but due to the Corona-virus, i haven’t traveled for a long time so I look forward to meeting all of you in the UK soon!
See you next Monday!

B:

Jobs related to coal mining and usage are disappearing. I think this is positive because the toxic chemicals are released when coal is burned. That situation is polluting the environment, so i think it’s positive.
Mining coal is a good skill for people who live in the countryside and do not have access to electricity through other methods. Maybe coal can be instead of other forms of electricity. So, I think sometimes it’s negative for some people.

C:

I worked in watch company when i was an intern. It was an honor to see watch makers to repair complex devices and instruments. They need to spend 2-3 weeks focusing on repair it. In my opinion / for me / I think that’s a good job for some people and really interesting but probably not suitable for me personally. 

D:

Yes! Sometimes, it represents people’s standard of living is getting better and better. But i have another perspective which is that I’m really into buying shoes and i really love my shoes. Sometimes, when my shoes are damaged and i don’t want waste it, i always try to find a repairman to repair them. And i want to share a photo of a shoemaker that I used to go to because it was a really good experience for me and I’d like to share it with you.

E:  I sent this email to my teacher and I want to listen to your opinion, too.

I am not satisfied with the essay I have written because I don’t understand HARVARD REFERENCING and I want to read more model essays that maybe can help me improve my essay writing.

I would really appreciate it if you could help me to find more model essays so I can work on it over the coming weeks.

essay:

With the development of society, the progress of science and technology leads to more and more advanced artificial intelligence. Our jobs in the future will be changing. What problems will we face in regard to working in the future and how can we solve them?

I think that man and machines are differnet, machines can improve our quality of life, we need to focus on which jobs cannot be replaced by robots. Does Industry 4.0 have to lead to a work-related struggle between man and machines? don’t robots also offer us certain opportunities? Eamonn Fitzgerald, Business Spotlight. 3/2016, Based on an abridged version of the article.

klaus Schwab, executive chairman of the World Economic Forum, wrote：“The current technological revolution need not become a race between humans and machines…” Eamonn Fitzgerald, Business Spotlight. 3/2016, Based on an abridged version of the article. Is there really no competition?

I am happy to live in the present society. We can learn more new technology and we challenge ourselves every day.

Robots is a job killer for people but meanwhile robots will bring more new technology and info. For example: “Yumi is the world’s first truly collaborative robot, abb sys of its latest tireless worker. Eamonn Fitzgerald, Business Spotlight 3/2016. People cannot keep working more than 24 hours, but robots can do and robots can do more and more and they are also very efficient. Once, my father cooked and he picked a call up and then he forgot that he was cooking. In the end the dinner was failed. After a few months, my father bougt a robot that always reminder him of everything. Somethimes, rotbos are good to people and we need to study how to use it. I think “trainer” is a good job and training new users on how to use the robot. More and more robots will be used which means after-sale maintenance is a good job.

Robots are tacking over our jobs; it is a real thing. Human is progressing but we cannot compete with robots and we must attach importance to these probles. Millions of jobs will go as robots rise. Eamonn Fitzgerald, Business Spotlight. 3/2016. For example, too many people with limited cooking ability and old people and disabled cannot cooking by themselves, rotbots is a good assistant. The biggest benefit is the time saved and the food is health than fast food.

In coslusion, I don’t think people worried abot robot is job killer however the robot is a good helper. Robot and people working together to creat endless possibilities. We need to have good people and good robots to change our enviorment. People live longer and longer only when technology is more advanced.