Online Class Notes (Lina) [W]

Grammar

I didn’t take my computer to there  Phuket  / I didn’t bring my computer on the trip /

He late the time – He delayed the time

We flied to there Phuket in the middle of the night  / We flew in the middle of the night 

so he opened his eyes all the the night /so he had his eyes open all night 

my son loves gun guns  / my son loves the gun (specific one)

the voice is loudly – the noice is loud / it makes a loud noice

The schedule is was imperfect / the schedule wasn’t perfect 

we found a boat can take us to the other island /we found a boat that could take us to the other island

I have been in thailand for four times / I have been to thailand

I want to try this  / I wanted to try that 

he is talking  a story  –  he is telling a story

didn’t good at study – isn’t good at studying 

e.g My son isn’t good at studying math nor languages.

I worried about his future (this is correct if past tense)  / I worry about his future / I am worried about his future 

I speak to myself, why I can I not accept him in middle level  – I tell myself, why cant I accept I accept him to be a mid level student  / I tell myself, why cant I accept I accept him to be average

Vocabulary

collegurs  – colleagues [  coll eeegs ]

e.g I have several colleagues  / My colleagues are very professional

e.g I have one colleague that I really like

Last week I went to Phuket with my team. It was not a wonderful team activity. Because the arrangement was confused.

The first one is when our flight was arrived, we should take one bus to the hotel and this bus need go and back for 4 times. 

The second one is the company want to save money, so 3 days in Phuket we changed 2 hotels. When we left the first one hotel we need stay in the hotel’s lobby to waiting the second hotel’s bus for 2 hours. It’s all about the imperfect details. 

The third one is, we want to go to night market to have fun, but there were 8 people followed include my boss. I think it was not a good moment for show the other side for your boss.

I don’t like team activity, I think group activity should be in 4people. Because it’s hard to take care of different people’s idea. And I don’t like being late and waiting.

Revised

Last week I went to Phuket with my team. It was not a wonderful team activity, because the arrangement was confusing.

The first one issue was is when our flight arrived, and we should have taken one bus to the hotel all together, but instead this bus needed go and back forth 4 times, which was inconvenient. 

The second issue is that the company want to save money, so for 3 days in Phuket we changed hotels twice. When we left the first hotel, we needed to stay in the hotel’s lobby, waiting for the second hotel’s bus for 2 hours. It’s all about the imperfect details.

The third issue was that we want to go to the night market to have fun, but we were 8 people going including my boss. I think it was not a good way to show another side of ourselves to our boss.

I don’t like team activities, I think group activities should be in 4people teams or less,  because it’s hard to take care of so many different people’s ideas, and I don’t like being late or waiting around for other people.