F2F Class Notes (Tanya) [S]

Vocabulary

slope – the shape of the mountain

e.g. The mountain slope was very steep.

Original

My name is Joan and I’m a C and B specialist in French cosmetics company. I like traveling, reading books and listening to music. I plan to France on May (Paris).

I hope my visa can be approved smoothly. I like to read detective books and books like Harry Potter. I read Chinese books and I bought set of

the Harry Potter books with English, but I haven’t finished. I think their a lot of words that I don’t know and they are not very useful in our life.

I am excited about Disneyland in Paris and the Eiffel Tower. I want to go to the Louvre to see the Mona Lisa and I want to try the local food. I have read

the other tourists articles about their trip and they said the macaron in French is different with that in Shanghai. They are not very sweet in France, but in Shanghai

they are all very sweet. I want to go to the local supermarket and I think there will be a lot of local things, like fruits and meats that you want to try.

I need to take my dictionary in my phone. I will go with my mom and my colleagues. I have went there for several times, because I bought a season

card for last season. I think that’s very interesting and Disneyland make people happy. The one problem is the line is too long. My favorite thing

at Disneyland in Shanghai is Tron. It’s a roller coaster. When I ride that that rollercoaster for the first time, I’m scared but when I turn off from this ride, it’s

too exciting.

Correction

My name is Joan and I’m a C and B specialist in a French cosmetics company. I like traveling, reading books and listening to music. I plan to go to

France in May (Paris). I hope my visa will be approved smoothly. I like to read detective books and books like Harry Potter. I read

Chinese books and I bought a set of the Harry Potter books in English, but I haven’t finished (reading).

I think there are a lot of words that I don’t know and they are not very useful in our life.

I am excited about Disneyland in Paris and the Eiffel Tower. I want to go to the Louvre to see the Mona Lisa and I want to try the local food. I have read

other tourists articles about their trip and they said that macarons (in general: plural) in France are different from those in Shanghai. They are not very sweet in France, but in Shanghai

they are all very sweet. I want to go to the local supermarket and I think there will be a lot of local things, like fruits and meats that I want to try.

I need to have a dictionary in my phone. I will go with my mom and my colleagues. I have been there several times, because I bought a season

card for last season. I think that’s very interesting and Disneyland makes people happy. The one problem is that the lines are too long. My favorite thing

at Disneyland in Shanghai is Tron. It’s a roller coaster. When I rode that roller coaster for the first time, I was scared but when I got off this ride, it was

too exciting.

Grammar

in (time, month) – in May

e.g. I plan to go to France in May.

to be different from

https://breakingnewsenglish.com/1803/180305-paris-metro.html

Write about what you think of this article. Paris!

Pronunciation

journey

spokesman

incident

pregnant

corridor

unacceptable

metro

complaints

prohibited