F2F Class Notes October 31st (Ben)

Demo StudentSophia

Grammar

MAKE / MADE / MADE

I have made lots of friends

take a picture OF someone

I took pictures OF the party FOR my company.

Corrections

I have been worked –> I have worked  /  I have been working

Even though A but B –> wrong

  • Even though A, B
  • A, but B

I have maken –> I have made

I don’t think eat out is a health way –> I don’t think eating out is healthy.

a way –> a way to do

It’s not a healthy way to live.

many / much

too many salts –> too much salt

countable: too many problems, too many books, too many friends

uncountable: too much money, too much time, too much water, too much perfume, too much salt, too much oil

You will get fat soon –> You will get fat fast

soon = tomorrow, in 1 hour, immediately

more healthier –> more healthy / healthier

I am easy to get angry –> I get angry easily.

I don’t speak easily to new people.

I make friends easily.

I learn new skills easily.

Pronunciation

disease

scale / skill

ORIGINAL
My name is Sophia.
I come from China
I work in a pharmaceutical company in China

I have been there since I am graduate from schoool

I like to work and live here

I have making lots of friends
I enjoy time spend withmy friends

I enjoys the work I have
My family is far away from Shanghai. We often speak with each other on the phone or see each other on Skype

Even though we are not close to eath other but with this smartphone, I don’t feel alone

During the spare time, I often go out my friends to take some photos with my camera and it’s very interesting to taking photos for different kinds of sceneries and make my life colourful.

I want to receive further education so I have to take this exam. That’s why I came here.
EDITED VERSION
My name is Sophia.
I come from China
I work in a pharmaceutical company in Shanghai.

I have been there since I GRADUATED UNIVERSITY.

I like to work and live here

I have MADE lots of friends

I enjoy THE time -I- spend with my friends

I enjoy the work I have

My family is far away from Shanghai. We often speak with each other on the phone or see each other on Skype.

Even though we are not close to eath other –I don’t feel alone THANKS TO smartphones.

During MY spare time, I often go out with my friends to take some photos with my camera and it’s very interesting TO TAKE photos for different kinds of sceneries and make my life colourful.

I want to receive further education so I have to take this exam. That’s why I came here TODAY.