F2F Class Notes March 7th (Ben)
HOMEWORK: Use Class Notes of March 6th to write a text
Writing exercise
Original
I don’t know why if you marry then you want a baby. First I don’t like children. Second why we want a baby?Only we are not good?We can do many things just us. If we have a kid we have no free and I can’t buy many things because we want take kid to school that will spend a lot of money. I don’t know why always woman do housework. They have work and they are tired too. If I marry I won’t do housework because if my husband really love me he will do that.
Edited version
I don’t know why you have to have a baby if you marry. Firstly, I don’t like children. Secondly, why do we need babies? Are we bad without one? We can do many things just the two of us.
If we have a kid, we have no freedom and I can’t buy many things because we need to take the kid to school.
That will cost a lot of money. I don’t know why women always do housework.
They have a job and they are tired too. If I get married, I won’t do any housework because if my husband really loves me, he will do that for me.
应该 have to, need to, must, should,
你应该有 You have to have
just the 2 of us
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