F2F Class Notes March 6th (Ben)

Vocabulary

a competition 比赛

take part (in) = 参加

a scholarship

We took part in a competition for a scholarship.

fill in 填写

a form 表格

We filled in a form.

apply (for) 申请

We applied for that scholarship.

rack your brains 费尽心思

Don’t rack your brains, you can’t change anything.

Original text

Five years ago,l went to the jinjiang park with my freinds.AT that time my father had a work in there,so we could play all free.We all the bold girls we could play all the facilities.My favourite project was roller coaster,it was really fun.The jinjiang park had biggest Ferris wheel in shanghai.Although l am bold,l afraid to haunted house.It was my nightmare when l was a kid.

Edited version

Five years ago, l went to Jinjiang Park with my friends. At that time my father had a job there, so we could play for free. We were all bold girls who could go on all the rides. My favourite thing was the roller coaster, it was really fun. Jinjiang Park had the biggest Ferris wheel in Shanghai.

But although l am bold, l am afraid of haunted houses. It was my nightmare when l was a kid.

• We usually don’t use “the” for names: the China, the Shanghai, the Disneyland
• in = 里 (you don’t always need it)
• Try to keep all verbs in the same tense 时态
• an amusement park 游乐场 has many rides 游乐设施
• I afraid OF –> one sentence has one subject and one verb
• names have capital letters 大写 : China, Shanghai
• the = 特定的， 大家都知道哪一个，哪一些
• 从句会这样开始：who, that, which, when, where, whose
• 可数名词 应该有 a, the, 复数 或 谓语 (my, your, his, her, etc)