F2F Class Notes March 14th (Ben)

Original

When I first went to university Z,L and me are friends. L was always fashion with brand bags. At first l really didn’t know about brand until L became me my best friend.She always looked at some fashion magazines and often told my what is this what is that. Then I knew brand and l found Z’s bags is false bags ! I asked L:”Did you know Z’s bags is false bags?”L said:”I always knew and I didn’t know you didn’t know I just thought you didn’t hurt her” I don’t know why the bags are false Z says they’re true.Maybe L and me from Shanghai and she doesn’t. Someone says people from Shanghai despise strangers but that is not truth. Maybe Z think she doesn’t from Shanghai and if we know she from a poor home we will despise her. Maybe she just like acts a rich people but all that are not question we were punished her.
Edited version

When I first went to university Z, L and I were friends. L was always fashionable with brand bags. At first, l really didn’t know about brands until L became my best friend. She always looked at some fashion magazines and often told me “What is this? What is that?”. Then I learned about brands and l found out Z’s bags were fake bags ! I asked L:”Did you know Z’s bags were fake bags?” L said:”I always knew and I thought you knew too! I just thought you didn’t want to hurt her”

I don’t know why Z says the fake bags are real. Maybe L and me are from Shanghai and she isn’t. Some people say people from Shanghai despise strangers but that is not the truth.

Maybe Z thinks we will despise her if we find out she is from a poor home and that she isn’t from Shanghai.

Maybe she just acts like a rich person but that is not a problem, as we have already punished her.

I think, he thinks, some people think

I say, he says, some people say

• try to keep the same tense everywyhere
• one sentence has one subject and one verb
• 可数名词 –> a, the, 复数 或 谓语 (my, your, his, her, etc)

find 找到

find out 发现

When the police found the robber, they found out it was a woman.