F2F Class Notes (Li)[S/W]

Write about your last trip in Spring.

Vocabulary

wrap up: to complete something successfully 圆满完成

eg. A grand parade will wrap up the weeklong celebration.

eg. The company will be wrapping up the lastest promotions at the end of the month.

socially awkward: nervous, shy or embarrassed in social situations 社交尴尬

eg. He doesn’t have many friends because of his socially awkward behaviour.

socially withdrawn: to refuse contact with society 社交退缩

eg. He has been socially withdrawn for several months.

withdrawal: when someone prefers to be alone and refuses to talk to others 沉默寡言；孤僻

eg. Withdrawal is a sign of depression.

arena: a large, flat area surrounded by seats used for sports or entertainment 场地，竞技场，剧场

eg. a concert arena

lens: 镜片，镜头

obvious: easy to see, recognize, or understand 显然的，明显的；明白的

eg. Isn’t it obvious that she doesn’t want to talk to you?

eg. The answer is pretty obvious if you think carefully.

Now, I sell my camera and I want to buy a better one. When I told my father every day, he agreed with me to buy a new one. Now, I’m not buy that and I help my friend but she want to make money, but she not just take photo for her idol. She also takes photos for other idols and sell them. Maybe two day ago, she go to Macau, you know the staff is very strict and told her that “you cannot take pictures here”.

Every December, there will be a lot of awards ceremonies. Now, not just one team, maybe ten team, 20 team. You can take more photos . So, this time is the best time to make money. Two years ago, the idol, the star is less than now. The station owner also less than now. Now, too many people do that living. They don’t make money from this.

Revised: 

Now, I sold my camera and I want to buy a better one. When I told my father every day, and he agreed to buy me a new one. I’ve not bought it and I help my friend to do some photoshop but she wants to make money, so she doesn’t just take photos of her idol. She also takes photos of other idols and sells them to fans. Two days ago, she went to Macau, you know the staff at the concert arena is very strict and told her that “you cannot take pictures here”.

Every December, there will be a lot of awards ceremonies. Now, there isn’t just one team, there are maybe ten to 20 teams. You can take more photos so, this time is the best time to make money. Two years ago, there were less idols. The station owner also less than now. Now, too many people make a living out of taking photos of idols. They don’t make money from this.

The New Year is drawing near so everyone is summing up the year and planning for the next. I also want to make New Year’s resolutions.
New Year’s resolutions are like setting a precise goal for the New Year and working hard to achieve it. Maybe many people’s New Year’s resolution is to lose weight and quit smoking successfully. But I am different from others. My New Year’s resolution is to be a happy person，and try to start taking pictures with the camera again. I really like photography but I hate crowds and busy places, and my strange social handicap makes me reluctant to go out.
I don’t have any big New Year’s resolutions I just want to be better than I am right now.

【Make sentences with introduce, reference, recommend. (different forms)】

My neighbor learned to draw in a good drawing school and he introduced this school to me. Teachers who teach here need to have a reference from the university so the teachers who work here are very excellent. If you want to learn to draw, I recommend you to come to this school.

Revised: 

New Years is coming near/close by so everyone is wrapping up the year and planning for the next. I also want to make New Year’s resolutions.

New Year’s resolutions are about setting a precise goal for the New Year and working hard to achieve it. Most people’s New Year’s resolution is to lose weight and quit smoking successfully but, I am different from others. My New Year’s resolution is to be a happy person, and try to start taking pictures with the camera/photography again. I really like photography but I hate crowds and busy places, and my social awkwardness makes me reluctant to go out.

I don’t have any big New Year’s resolutions, I just want to be better than I am right now.

【Make sentences with introduce, reference, recommend. (different forms)】

My neighbor learned to draw in a good drawing school and he introduced this school to me. Teachers who teach here need to have a reference from the university so the teachers who work here are very professional/excellent. If you want to learn to draw, I recommend you to come to this school.