F2F Class Notes (Lily) [R]

she read her school writing on “My Favorite City”

My favourite city is Shanghai, there are many things I like talking about this city. The first thing is about the food: which is the eggs, Yang’s dumplings and so on. I love the eggs because it will help us smart/brilliant. I also love Yang’s Dumplings because it is very yummy, juicy and crispy. The second thing is the interesting places. I went to Nanjing RD before. Lastly, I would say about the culture, which is the calligraph and Kong Fu.

Revised

There are many things i like about this city. The first thing is about the food, which are the eggs, Yang’s Dumplings and so on. I love the eggs because they will help us to be smarter. I also love Yang’s Dumplings because they are very yummy, juicy and crispy. , juicy and crispy. The second thing I want to talk about are the interesting places. I have been to Nanjing RD before. Moreover, I would like to talk about the culture.