F2F Class Notes (Li)

Vocabulary

dumpster – a container where you dump rubbish

Let me know your thoughts/what you’re thinking/Share with me your thoughts  

feedback – information or other people’s opinion about something

ex. You’ll receive his feedback in 3 days about the new burger.

ex. There was a lot of positive feedback on your performance.

Grammar

put a comma after the verb before the speech marks

ex. She asked, “Who are you?”

I told his 

I told him – object pronoun

She thinks she need to help Wilbur avoid from death.

She thinks she needs to help Wilbur avoid death.

She’s willing to help Wilbur without feedback.

She’s willing to help Wilbur without expecting anything in return.

After a few days, Charlotte held a meeting about with the other creatures in the barn except Templeton .She held this meeting because she wanted to get more suggestions that was about which new word should she use next time. Every creatures joined this meeting and told Charlotte their thinking and then the goose said “how about “terrific” “, but Wilbur lost him confidence because he think he is not a terrific pig. Suddenly, the old goose said ” if you want to more new words, you should find Templeton to help it , for he always go outside to find food and you can let him go to dump to find some magazines or paper” .Charlotte said “it is a good idea but i can’t sure Templeton whether help it or not ” and then the older goose said that he will. When Templeton went back ,the next step this older goose told his this idea and told him Wilbur’s life linked with his life. Finally, Templeton agreed this idea. The dark comes, Charlotte wrote down ” terrific” on the web and the next day comes, Lurvy and Mr Zuckerman felt surprise when they saw the new word, and quickly , this fantastic view attracted more people to visiting.

Revised: 

After a few days, Charlotte held a meeting about with the other creatures in the barn except Templeton. She held this meeting because she wanted to get some suggestions for which new words she should use next time. Every creature joined this meeting and shared with Charlotte their thoughts and then the goose said, “How about “terrific”? ” But, Wilbur lost his confidence because he thought he is not a terrific pig. Suddenly, the old goose said, “If you want to get more new words, you should find Templeton to help you, for he always goes outside to find food and you can ask him go to dumpsters to find some magazines or paper.” Charlotte said, “It is a good idea, but I can’t be sure whether Templeton is willing to help.” And then, the older goose said that he will. When Templeton went back, the next step this older goose told him this idea and also that Wilbur’s life is linked with his life. Finally, Templeton agreed with this idea. The night comes, Charlotte form the word  “Terrific” on the web and the next day comes. Lurvy and Mr Zuckerman felt surprised when they saw the new word, and quickly, this fantastic view attracted more people to visit.

Pronunciation

mutual – mew-chew-al