F2F Class Notes (Li)

Vocabulary

good/excellent value for money – high CP

convenience – noun

convenient – adj

high heels  – shoes that are not flat

name card – ming pian

it was successful/it went well – to say that things went smoothly

maintain – to keep in good condition

Grammar

write – wrote (past tense)

go on a website/app/online store

Write about a bad online shopping experience you’ve had.

Nowadays, many people prefer shopping online to shopping in-store. It’s very convenience and saves time,
but does it always only have advantages ? I don’t think so. Today I want to tell you guys a bad online shopping experience I’ve had.

A few weeks ago, I wanted to buy a mini desk to study, so I opened Tb to search some related products. I chose one quickly,
and I browsed its details and comments from customers. I felt it is high cost performance and decided to buy it.

In the next tow days, I can’t wait to get the package, I really liked it through seeing its pictures. It was white and small.

On the third day, I saw the package in the front of my door when I got home after work. I opened it at once, and it seemed like it is very difficult for assembling them.

It took me 2 hours to assemble it, but it was so wobble that I was very disappointed. Finally, I asked for a refund and the shopkeeper agreed.

When the deliveryman picked up my parcel, he said it need to cost 35 yuan, and I was shocked suddenly, because the desk cost 40 yuan. I though for five seconds

and I didn’t want to return it, the freight was too expensive.

Now, the desk is still left in front of my house… I’m so sad.

Revised: 

Nowadays, many people prefer shopping online to shopping in-store. It’s very convenient and saves time, but does it always only have advantages ? I don’t think so. Today I want to tell you guys about a bad online shopping experience I’ve had.

A few weeks ago, I wanted to buy a mini desk to study, so I went on TB to search for some related products. I chose one quickly,
and I read through its details and comments from customers. I felt that it was good value for money and decided to buy it.

Over the next two days, I couldn’t wait to get the package, I really liked it from seeing the pictures. It is white and small.

On the third day, I saw the package in the front of my door when I got home after work. I opened it at once, and it seemed like it was very difficult to assemble it.

It took me 2 hours to assemble it, but it was so wobbly that I was very disappointed. Finally, I asked for a refund and the shopkeeper agreed.

When the delivery man picked up my parcel, he said it needed to cost 35 yuan, and I was shocked suddenly, because the desk costs only 40 yuan. I thought for five seconds

and I didn’t want to return it – the freight was too expensive.

Now, the desk is still sitting in front of my house… I’m so sad.