F2F Class Notes (HowHow / Jesse) [S]

Write a diary about what you did today from morning to now. Try to make longer sentences using and, which, for, and then, so, because… 

sunday was just so so. i woke up at 9am and i eat breakfast at half past 9. I did my homework at 10 o’clock. I eat lunch at 12 o’clock and then i went to I have a class. The first class is 1 o’clock to half past 2. The 2nd class is half past 2 to 4 o’clock. I eat dinner at 6 o’clock. I play iphone, play crash car. I don’t have money very much because I should fight a lot of people and then have some money.

Corrected

Sunday was just so so. I woke up at 9am and i ate breakfast at half past 9. I did my homework at 10 o’clock. I ate lunch at 12 o’clock and then i had a class. The first class was 1 o’clock to half past 2. The 2nd class was half past 2 to 4 o’clock. I ate dinner at 6 o’clock. I played crash-car on iPhone. I can’t buy a car because I don’t have game-money. I should fight a lot of people and then I will have some money.

Jesse’s longer version

Sunday was just so so because I had 2 classes and those classes are just OK. I woke up at 9am because it was Sunday so I didn’t have school.  After that, I ate Nutella on toast for breakfast at half past 9 and it tasted really good. I did my homework at 10 o’clock for 2 hours which is a long time. I ate at home for lunch at 12 o’clock and then i had a class. The first class was maths which is my favourite class and was at 1 o’clock to half past 2. The 2nd class was Chinese and at half past 2 to 4 o’clock. I ate sushi roll for dinner at 6 o’clock and then I played crash-car on iPhone. I can’t buy a car because I don’t have game-money so I should fight a lot of people and then I will have some money.