F2F Class Notes January 23rd (Ben)

Original

Chinese people think that the Spring Festival is the best important Festival of the year.
The Spring Festival is thought a best important Festival of a year.
In the Spring Festival, the south person like to eat glutinous rice balls and the north person love to eat dumplings.
In the Spring Festival,glutinous rice balls and dumplings are eaten by south and north person in China.
This morning, I found a bread on the table was bitten by a rat.
A bread on the table was found to be bitten by a rat.

Edited version

Chinese people think that the Spring Festival is the most important Festival of the year.
The Spring Festival is thought to be the most important Festival of the year.
In the Spring Festival, Southern people like to eat glutinous rice balls and Northerners love to eat dumplings.
In the Spring Festival, glutinous rice balls and dumplings are eaten by Southerners and Northerners.
This morning, I found a piece of bread on the table had been bitten by a rat.

A piece of bread on the table had been bitten by a rat.

A piece of bread on the table was found to be bitten by a rat.

A piece of bread on the table was found to have been bitten by a rat.

Northern people = Northerners

a loaf of bread

a piece of bread

a copycat = someone who copies everything because they have no idea of their own.

Sometimes I put on a smile but I secretly dislike the person I’m talking to.