F2F Class Notes (Cricket)[W]

Writing exercise

I went to Yunnan last week, it’s a nine days trip with my aunt and her friends. We flew to Dali and stay there for three days, we walking along the erhai lake. The air is fresh, the water is clean, the sky is blue and the clouds are white. It’s beautiful and everything is perfect. Then we went to Lijiang. The quiet bar there are very famous and we went to the bar at night, there is a bar called magpie the singer singing very pretty.

I went to Yunnan last week, it’s was a nine day trip with my aunt and her friends. We flew to Dali and stayed there for three days. We walked along Erhai lake. The air is fresh, the water is clean, the sky is blue and the clouds are white. It’s beautiful and everything is perfect. After we went to Lijiang. The quiet bars there are very famous.  We went to the bars at night. One bar was called Magpie the singer singing had a very pretty voice.