F2F Class Notes April 13th (Ben)

Vocabulary

an inspiration å¸æ°” (å)

an expiration 呼气 (å)

Every pose requires a cycle of 5 inspirations and expirations.


Grammar

half an hour = 30 mn

an hour and a half = 90 mn


Writing exercise

Original

When NOKIA entered into in China, I just started to cooperation with the brand promotion. I was responsible for sale and customer services. We created NOKIA professioner store. There were the image of unified and furniture. We set up standard procedure and professioner customer services. We had an ERP systerm for contorl every inventory every mobile to sell detail around the world. We had the best team and the ‘people first’ corporate culture. Although because of the board’s wrong decision,the great brand already gone for ever. But we always love it.

Edited version

When NOKIA entered into in China, I just started to work for its brand development. I was responsible for sales and customer service.

We created NOKIA professional stores. They had very similar layouts 布局 and identical furniture.

We set up standard procedures and professional customer service. We had an ERP system to see inventory logistics in real time around the world. We had the best team and a ‘people first’ corporate culture. However, because of the board’s wrong decisions, that great brand is already gone forever.

My former team and I will always miss it.

In English, one clause å¥å­ has one subject 主语 and one verb 动è¯

When we together –> when we are together