F2F Class Notes April 12th (Ben)

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Mothers get less sleep than fathers after having children, especially when they are babies. The same situation as in my family. Since Olivia was born, we all revolves around her. This changes our life. The most significant effect is sleep deprivation due to her irregular sleeping pattern. When she was just a baby, we often heard her cry at night. She might be feeling hungry, so I need to get up to feed her. Consequently, I had to wake several times at night care for their children sometimes.
However, having children has a positive effect on our life. It enables us to become more responsible, it brings us more happiness and enhances the relationship between husband and wife. When Olivia spoke for the first time, called us mom and dad, walked for the first time, I felt rather joyful and excited. Seeing her grows day by day, I am extremely happy.

Edited version

Mothers get less sleep than fathers after having children, especially when they are babies. The same situation takes place in my family.

Since Olivia was born, we all revolve around her. This changes our life. The most significant adversity is my sleep deprivation due to her irregular sleeping pattern. When she was just a baby, we often heard her cry at night. She sometimes felt hungry, so I needed to get up to feed her. Consequently, I sometimes had to wake up several times at night to (and) care for her .

However, having children has a positive effect on our life. It enables us to become more responsible, it brings us more happiness and can enhance the relationship between husband and wife. When Olivia spoke for the first time, called us mom and dad, walked for the first time, I felt rather joyful and excited.

Seeing her grow day by day makes me extremely happy.

1. 一个句子：一个主语，一个动词
2. 换时态应该有很清楚的原因
3. 动词+s = 第三人称

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