F2F Class Notes _4th May (Harmony) [2]

2: review + story + main errors for focus + writing HW / upgrade / related vocabulary

Homework:  Write another story using these words and the upgraded words.  Focus on making sentences that use the words in different ways.   Watch your tense! 

Ex:  Stretched across the floor/ smile stretched across her face.

Storytelling:

Scrape, Lump, Bruise, Bitter, Stretch, Shattered

 

 

Last week I tried to take a bath for a small cat but she didn’t like it.  Finally, she scraped me on my hand and I thought I forgive her.  On the same day my daughter fell on the road while she was playing outside.  There was a big lump on her head, and a bruise on her knees.  She felt so unhappy and shattered.  I gave her an apple and it was not bitter.  In the end she stretched her smile in her face.

Gave (gayve)

Leona Edit:

Last week I tried to take a bath for a small cat but she didn’t like it.  Finally, she scraped me on my hand and that’s not matter.  On the same day my daughter fell on the road while she was playing outside.  There was a big lump on her head, and a bruise on her knees.  She felt so unhappy and shattered.  I gave her an apple and it was not bitter.  In the end she stretched her smile in her face.

Edit Together:

Last week I tried to give a bath to a small cat but she didn’t like it.  Finally, she scraped me on my hand and I didn’t mind.  On the same day my daughter fell on the road while she was playing outside.  There was a big lump on her head, and bruises on her knees.  She felt so unhappy and her good mood was shattered.  I gave her an apple and it was not bitter.  In the end her smile stretched across her face.

Bruises on her knees/ a bruise on her knee

Upgrading:

Finally – In the end/ At the end she scraped me on my hand, I didn’t mind but I gave up.  / I didn’t mind, and completed the bath.

Swell:  when you are injured and the injury gets bigger as the skin grows/rises out.

Swelling – Lump – Bruise

Ex:  Swelling sounds more painful than getting a lump.

Ex:  I fell at twisted my ankle, now it is swollen.

Ex:  Her head started to swell, and a lump formed.

Shattered – She dropped the cup down to the floor then the cup shattered.  – onto the floor.

Ex:  She was holding a cup, and it shattered as it fell with her/ onto the road.

Fell with her = fell together/ fell at the same time

Unhappy/ sad/ upset/ angry/ embarrassed/ miserable/ down

Ex:  She was nervous that mom would be mad about the shattered cup.

I gave her an apple – I gave her an apple for letting her feel betterto make her feel better.

Stretched – In the end, she stretched out in the sun and ate her apple with the cat.

Ex:  The cat stretched across the bed.