F2F Class Notes _27th May (Harmony) [1]

Original:

I came back from Thailand on the 22nd and now I will be writing about this trip’s highlights. This time I went there with my older sister. We went to a few areas around Thailand: Bangkok, Pattaya and Phuket. Bangkok is in central Thailand and it is the country’s capital. It is an international city like Shanghai but not quite as flourishing as Shanghai. Pattaya has a very exciting night life. There are a lot of bars where you can drink wine or coffee while watching the ladyboys’ show. My favorite area was Phuket, which is an island. On this island I went scuba diving in the Pacific Ocean and I saw a lot of kinds of fish and coral. Then we ate tons of seafood like oysters, lobsters and crabs. Unfortunately while eating lobsters I got a cut under my tongue which still hurts. (it’s very painful even now.) and means I can just eat bland food. The scenery of Phuket is too beautiful to let you relax. We did not stay in a hostel, we stayed in a 5-star hotel, and we had an amazing view of the swimming pool from our window. The hotel’s breakfast was buffet which was fun and diverse. When I went swimming I always had a floaty to relax on. When we got into the sea to scuba diving we had to take an oxygen tank and a face mask.

Retell:

I came back to Shanghai on the 22nd of May this time I went Thailand with my older sister.  We went 3 places of Thailand they are:  Bangkok, Phuket and Pattaya.  Bangkok is a centre in Thailand and it is also the Thailand capital.  It’s a international city like Shanghai but it is less flourishing than Shanghai. 

In Pattaya people often took some activities in night, you can in the bar to drink wine or coffee or other style drinks with watching ladyboys shows.  My favorite area is phuket.  In there we got scuba diving in the pacific ocean.  Under the sea we could see a lot of fish and coral.  I like the 5 star hotels breakfast, which was a buffet.  We ate a lot of food that we like.  From the hotels window we could see the whole view about their swimming pool.  Because I can’t swim so when I swim in the swimming pool I should take a floaty. 

We ate a lot of seafood including lobsters, crabs and oysters.  Unfortunately I got a cut  under my tongue while I was eating lobster.  It’s so pain, but it’s better now!

Grace Edited:

I came back to Shanghai on the 22nd of May. This time I went Thailand with my older sister.  We went 3 places of Thailand they were:  Bangkok, Phuket and Pattaya.  Bangkok is the centre of Thailand and it is also Thailand’s capital.  It’s an international city like Shanghai but it is less flourishing than Shanghai. 

In Pattaya people often take activities at night, you can drink wine, or coffee, or other style drinks in the bar with watching ladyboys shows.  My favourite area is Phuket, we went scuba diving in the pacific ocean there.  Under the sea we could see a lot of kinds of fish and coral.  I liked the 5-star hotels breakfast, which was a buffet.  We ate a lot of food that we liked.  From the hotels window we could see the whole view of their swimming pool.  Because I can’t swim so when I go in the swimming pool I should take a floaty. 

We ate a lot of seafood including lobsters, crabs and oysters.  Unfortunately I got a cut  under my tongue while I was eating lobsters.  It’s so pain, but it’s better now!

Edit Together:

I came back to Shanghai from Thailand on the 22nd of May. This time I went to Thailand with my older sister.  We went to 3 places in Thailand, they were:  Bangkok, Phuket and Pattaya.  Bangkok is the centre of Thailand and it is also Thailand’s capital.  It’s an international city like Shanghai but it is less flourishing than Shanghai. 

In Pattaya people often do many activities at night, for example you can drink wine, or coffee, or other style drinks in a bar while watching a ladyboys shows.  My favourite area was Phuket, we went scuba diving in the pacific ocean there.  Under the sea we could see a lot of kinds of fish and coral.  I liked the 5-star hotels breakfast, which was a buffet.  We ate a lot of food that we liked.  From the hotels window we could see the whole view of their swimming pool.  Because I can’t swim so when I go in the swimming pool I should take a floaty. 

We ate a lot of seafood including lobsters, crabs and oysters.  Unfortunately I got a cut  under my tongue while I was eating lobsters.  It was so painful, but it’s better now!

tense (past tense/ future tense)

to / a (before nouns)

s (lobsters)

I will have an activity with my high schools mates – with my old high school friends

Reunion:  to become united again!  Usually is when family/classmates/co-workers plan a big get together to visit with each other.

eg.  High school reunion/ family reunion/ college reunion

not real mango – fake dried mango

Captain America

San D – 3D/ three D

*** homework:  watch “Inside Out”